svn commit: r49621 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

Gavin Atkinson <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: gavin
Date: Wed Nov  2 01:34:58 2016
New Revision: 49621
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49621

Log:
  Review quarterly status report, fix misspellings, tweak grammar, correct bad
  capitalisation, and use https:// URLs where possible for FreeBSD resources.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-07-2016-09.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-07-2016-09.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-07-2016-09.xml	Tue Nov  1 21:24:14 2016	(r49620)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-07-2016-09.xml	Wed Nov  2 01:34:58 2016	(r49621)
@@ -110,13 +110,13 @@
       <ul>
 	<li>&os; as the host OS</li>
 
-	<li><a href="http://man.FreeBSD.org/bhyve/8">bhyve</a></li>
+	<li><a href="https://man.FreeBSD.org/bhyve/8">bhyve</a></li>
 
 	<li><a href="https://www.xenproject.org/">xen</a></li>
 
-	<li><a href="http://man.freebsd.org/vale/4">vale</a></li>
+	<li><a href="https://man.FreeBSD.org/vale/4">vale</a></li>
 
-	<li><a href="http://man.freebsd.org/jail/8">jail</a></li>
+	<li><a href="https://man.FreeBSD.org/jail/8">jail</a></li>
 
 	<li><a href="https://www.bsdstore.ru/">CBSD</a> (as a
 	  management tool)</li>
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@
     </body>
 
     <sponsor>
-      Google Inc.
+      Google Inc
     </sponsor>
 
     <sponsor>
@@ -545,8 +545,8 @@
 	<li><tt>x11-clocks/xfce4-datetime-plugin</tt> (0.6.99)</li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p>Currently, the unstable releases work fine with our Gtk3
-	ports available in the ports tree, but in the future, support
+      <p>Currently the unstable releases work fine with our Gtk3
+	ports available in the ports tree, but in the future support
 	for 3.18 will be removed in preference of 3.20.x.</p>
     </body>
 
@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@
     </body>
 
     <sponsor>
-      iXsystems, Inc.
+      iXsystems, Inc
     </sponsor>
 
     <help>
@@ -957,7 +957,7 @@
     </contact>
 
     <links>
-      <url href="http://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/ports/head/textproc/igor">The <tt>igor</tt> Port.</url>
+      <url href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/ports/head/textproc/igor">The <tt>igor</tt> Port.</url>
       <url href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/base/head/share/misc/bsd-family-tree?view=log">BSD Family Tree in Subversion</url>
       <url href="http://www.tuhs.org">The UNIX Heritage Society</url>
       <url href="http://man.cat-v.org">Cat-V Manual Library</url>
@@ -1418,7 +1418,7 @@
 	<tt>mtx_trylock_spin(9)</tt> was implemented and is used for
 	this purpose.</p>
 
-      <p>The userspace <tt>getttimeofday(2)</tt> implementation was
+      <p>The userspace <tt>gettimeofday(2)</tt> implementation was
 	enhanced to allow syscall-less operation on machines that use
 	HPET hardwire for timecounters.  The HPET algorithm coexists
 	with older RDTSC-based code, allowing dynamic switching of
@@ -1429,7 +1429,7 @@
 	but, not unexpectedly, even the syscall-less HPET timecounter
 	is slower than invoking a syscall for RDTSC.</p>
 
-      <p>Some not strictly interwined but related code is the
+      <p>Some not strictly intertwined but related code is the
 	time-bound sleep implementation.  Handling of races between
 	callouts and the top-half code that sets and processes the
 	timeouts depended on the many fine details of the
@@ -1610,13 +1610,13 @@
 
     <links>
       <url href="https://github.com/&os;Desktop/&os;-base-graphics">GitHub Repository</url>
-      <url href="http://wiki.FreeBSD.org/Graphics">Graphics Stack Roadmap and Supported Hardware Matrix</url>
+      <url href="https://wiki.FreeBSD.org/Graphics">Graphics Stack Roadmap and Supported Hardware Matrix</url>
       <url href="https://github.com/&os;/&os;-ports-graphics">Ports Development Repository</url>
       <url href="https://github.com/&os;Desktop/&os;-base-graphics/tree/drm-next-4.7">DRM 4.7 Development Repository</url>
-      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/action/recall/SummerOfCodeIdeas?action=recall&amp;rev=67#Devices_management:_link_.2Fdev_entries_to_sysctl_nodes">GSoC 2016: Link <tt>/dev</tt> Entries to Sysctl Nodes</url>
+      <url href="https://wiki.FreeBSD.org/action/recall/SummerOfCodeIdeas?action=recall&amp;rev=67#Devices_management:_link_.2Fdev_entries_to_sysctl_nodes">GSoC 2016: Link <tt>/dev</tt> Entries to Sysctl Nodes</url>
       <url href="https://wiki.FreeBSD.org/SummerOfCode2016/RethinkLibdevq">GSoC 2016: Redesign libdevq </url>
       <url href="https://github.com/yohanesu75/&os;-base-graphics/wiki/Wayland-on-&os;">Wayland Notes</url>
-      <url href="http://planet.FreeBSD.org/graphics">Graphics Team Blog</url>
+      <url href="https://planet.FreeBSD.org/graphics">Graphics Team Blog</url>
     </links>
 
     <body>
@@ -1724,7 +1724,7 @@
 	<li>Provided kernel support for EFI Runtime Services
 	  calls</li>
 
-	<li>Implemented <tt>getttimeofday(2)</tt> purely in userspace
+	<li>Implemented <tt>gettimeofday(2)</tt> purely in userspace
 	  for HPET timers</li>
 
 	<li>Implemented <tt>fdatasync(2)</tt></li>
@@ -1889,13 +1889,13 @@
 	  22-25, 2016, Belgrade, Serbia (Silver Sponsor) (<a
 	    href="https://2016.eurobsdcon.org/">https://2016.eurobsdcon.org/</a>)</p>
 
-	  <p>Our EuroBSDCon involvement included:</p>
+	  <p>Our EuroBSDcon involvement included:</p>
 
 	  <ul>
 	    <li>Held a Women in Tech BoF in partnership with ACM-W
 	      Europe</li>
 
-	    <li>Bennedict organized the EuroBSDCon Developer
+	    <li>Bennedict organized the EuroBSDcon Developer
 	    Summit</li>
 
 	    <li>Deb gave a Foundation Update talk and Hiroki Sato and
@@ -1929,7 +1929,7 @@
       </ul>
 
       <p>We sponsored three &os; contributors to attend
-	EuroBSDCon.</p>
+	EuroBSDcon.</p>
 
       <p>Legal/&os; IP</p>
 
@@ -2119,12 +2119,12 @@
 	  <given>Ed</given>
 	  <common>Maste</common>
 	</name>
-	<email>[email protected]</email>
+	<email>[email protected]</email>
       </person>
     </contact>
 
     <links>
-      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/LLD">LLD Wiki Page</url>
+      <url href="https://wiki.FreeBSD.org/LLD">LLD Wiki Page</url>
     </links>
 
     <body>
@@ -2246,7 +2246,7 @@
 	machines, supervised the package builds for 11.0-RELEASE, and
 	added support for building arm64 packages.</p>
 
-      <p>At EuroBSDCon, rene visited a presentation by Landry Breuil
+      <p>At EuroBSDcon, rene visited a presentation by Landry Breuil
 	&lt;[email protected]&gt; explaining how packages are built
 	in the OpenBSD world and explaining various design
 	decisions.</p>
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