svn commit: r49887 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status
Warren Block <[email protected]>
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Author: wblock
Date: Mon Jan 23 03:39:15 2017
New Revision: 49887
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49887
Log:
Edited for grammar and content.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-10-2016-12.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-10-2016-12.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-10-2016-12.xml Sun Jan 22 23:39:38 2017 (r49886)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-10-2016-12.xml Mon Jan 23 03:39:15 2017 (r49887)
@@ -1815,7 +1815,7 @@
source, or technology events geared towards underrepresented
groups.</p>
- <p>We support the &os; focused events to help provide a venue
+ <p>We support the &os;-focused events to help provide a venue
for sharing knowledge, to work together on projects, and
to facilitate collaboration between developers and commercial
users. This all helps provide a healthy ecosystem. We support
@@ -1824,7 +1824,7 @@
applications, and to recruit more contributors to the
Project.</p>
- <p>We also sponsored and/or attended the following events last
+ <p>We also sponsored or attended the following events last
quarter:</p>
<ul>
@@ -1850,7 +1850,7 @@
<p>The Foundation owns the &os; trademarks, and it is our
responsibility to protect them. We continued to review requests
and grant permission to use the trademarks. We also provided
- legal support for the core team, to investigate the status of
+ legal support for the core team to investigate the status of
certain patents.</p>
<p>&os; Community Engagement</p>
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