svn commit: r50128 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge

Sevan Janiyan <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: sevan
Date: Tue Apr  4 13:16:44 2017
New Revision: 50128
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50128

Log:
  Reword sentences to improve readability.
  
  PR:		218072
  Submitted by:	Samuel Breese <samuel AT chame co>
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D10261

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Tue Apr  4 13:13:10 2017	(r50127)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Tue Apr  4 13:16:44 2017	(r50128)
@@ -1704,9 +1704,9 @@ Script started, output file is /var/tmp/
 	replace the current file with the new one.  For most
 	unmodified files, this is the best option.</para>
 
-      <para>Choosing to merge the file will present a text editor, and
-	the contents of both files.  The files can be merged by
-	reviewing both files side by side on the screen, and choosing
+      <para>Choosing to merge the file will present a text editor with
+	the contents of both files open.  The files can be merged by
+	reviewing both files side by side on the screen and choosing
 	parts from both to create a finished product.  When the files
 	are compared side by side, <keycap>l</keycap> selects the left
 	contents and <keycap>r</keycap> selects contents from the
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