svn commit: r50139 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction

Author: brd
Date: Sun Apr  9 00:48:24 2017
New Revision: 50139
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50139

Log:
  Fix some grammer and a missing apostrophe.
  
  PR:		218069
  Submitted by:	Daniel Petti <[email protected]>

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Sun Apr  9 00:38:58 2017	(r50138)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Sun Apr  9 00:48:24 2017	(r50139)
@@ -614,7 +614,7 @@
 
 	    </indexterm> - Stormshield Network Security appliances
 	    are based on a hardened version of &os;.  The BSD license
-	    allows us to integrate our own intellectual property with
+	    allows them to integrate their own intellectual property with
 	    the system while returning a great deal of interesting
 	    development to the community.</para>
 	</listitem>
@@ -626,7 +626,7 @@
 	      <primary>The Weather Channel</primary>
 
 	    </indexterm> - The IntelliStar appliance that is installed
-	    at each local cable providers headend and is responsible
+	    at each local cable provider's headend and is responsible
 	    for injecting local weather forecasts into the cable TV
 	    network's programming runs &os;.</para>
 	</listitem>
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