svn commit: r50305 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide

Mathieu Arnold <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: mat
Date: Wed May 31 12:49:08 2017
New Revision: 50305
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50305

Log:
  A few more nits from matthew.
  
  Submitted by:	matthew
  Sponsored by:	Absolight

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Wed May 31 12:48:57 2017	(r50304)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Wed May 31 12:49:08 2017	(r50305)
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ You need a Passphrase to protect your secret key.</scr
 
     <note>
       <para>Unless the Kerberos-authenticated services
-	of the &os;.org cluster was used previously,
+	of the &os;.org cluster have been used previously,
 	<errorname>Client unknown</errorname> will be shown.  This
 	error means that the
 	<command>ssh kpasswd.freebsd.org</command> method shown above
@@ -1168,7 +1168,7 @@ You need a Passphrase to protect your secret key.</scr
 
 	<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn copy svn+ssh://repo.freebsd.org/base/head svn+ssh://repo.freebsd.org/base/stable/8</userinput></screen>
 
-	<para>This is equivalent to this set of commands
+	<para>This is equivalent to these commands
 	  which take minutes and hours as opposed to seconds,
 	  depending on your network connection:</para>
 
@@ -1462,7 +1462,7 @@ You need a Passphrase to protect your secret key.</scr
 	  <para>Because of the mergeinfo propagation issues described
 	    earlier, it is very important to never merge changes
 	    into a sparse working copy.  Always use a full
-	    checkout of the branch being merge into.  For instance,
+	    checkout of the branch being merged into.  For instance,
 	    when merging from HEAD to 7, use a full checkout
 	    of stable/7:</para>
 
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