svn commit: r50640 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

Benjamin Kaduk <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: bjk
Date: Mon Aug  7 02:26:00 2017
New Revision: 50640
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50640

Log:
  Edits to the 2017Q2 report from linimon
  
  Submitted by:	linimon

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2017-04-2017-06.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2017-04-2017-06.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2017-04-2017-06.xml	Sun Aug  6 06:09:38 2017	(r50639)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2017-04-2017-06.xml	Mon Aug  7 02:26:00 2017	(r50640)
@@ -203,10 +203,10 @@
 	OVH is using ZFS, an introduction to jails, and a use case for
 	BGP/bird on &os;.</p>
 
-      <p> The second meetup, also hosted in the OVH office, presented these
+      <p>The second meetup, also hosted in the OVH office, presented these
 	subjects: how to create a &os; port (presented by jadawin@),
 	how OVH is using Finite State Machines for managing their
-	storage system, network high-availibility with &os;, and a
+	storage system, network high-availability with &os;, and a
 	jail tutorial by means of a demonstration running 200 OSFP
 	(using <tt>net/bird</tt>) routers using jail and vnets on a
 	small PC Engines APU2 system with only 4 CPU cores (1Ghz AMD)
@@ -354,8 +354,8 @@
 	of &os;, announcing code freezes, and maintaining the
 	respective branches, among other things.</p>
 
-      <p>The &os;&nbsp;11.1-RELEASE cycle started on May 19, and is
-	continuing as scheduled.  &os; consumers are urged to test
+      <p>The &os;&nbsp;11.1-RELEASE cycle started on May 19, and
+	continued as scheduled.  &os; consumers are urged to test
 	whenever possible to help ensure the reliability and stability
 	of the upcoming second release from the <tt>stable/11</tt>
 	branch.</p>
@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@
     <links>
       <url href="https://wiki.FreeBSD.org/LLD">&os; <tt>lld</tt> Wiki Page</url>
       <url href="http://llvm.org/pr23214">&os;/LLD Tracking PR (LLVM Bugzilla)</url>
-      <url href="https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/214864"> Exp-Run Request Using <tt>lld</tt> as <tt>/usr/bin/ld</tt></url>
+      <url href="https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/214864">Exp-Run Request Using <tt>lld</tt> as <tt>/usr/bin/ld</tt></url>
     </links>
 
     <body>
@@ -474,7 +474,6 @@
       </person>
     </contact>
 
-
     <body>
       <p>DTS (Device Tree Source) files provide a human-readable
 	source description of the hardware resources for a given
@@ -687,7 +686,7 @@
 	usable.  This attempt that I call &quot;Plan B&quot;, only
 	uses &os;, with one &os; server handling the metadata
 	operations and multiple &os; servers configured to serve
-	data, is now ready for third party testing.  If testing by
+	data and is now ready for third party testing.  If testing by
 	third parties goes well, I anticipate the code will be
 	merged into &os; head in time for &os;&nbsp;12.  Fairly
 	recent &os; or Linux systems should be usable as pNFS
@@ -1084,7 +1083,7 @@
       <p>The most important changes since the last report are:</p>
 
       <ul>
-	<li>Ceph has releassed the release candidate of v12.1.0 (aka
+	<li>Ceph has released release candidate v12.1.0 (aka
 	  Luminous); the corresponding packaging is sitting in my tree
 	  waiting for Luminous to be actually released.</li>
 
@@ -1164,7 +1163,7 @@
 	the packages &os; already has in place.  There are many
 	details to work out here.</task>
 
-      <task>Design a vitual disk implementation that can be used with
+      <task>Design a virtual disk implementation that can be used with
 	<tt>bhyve</tt> and attached to an RBD image.</task>
     </help>
   </project>
@@ -1417,7 +1416,7 @@
 	is both a KDE committer and part of our KDE on &os; team, for
 	spearheading the efforts.</p>
 
-      <p>The following big updates were landed in the ports tree this
+      <p>The following big updates landed in the ports tree this
 	quarter:</p>
 
       <ul>
@@ -1445,7 +1444,7 @@
 	<li><tt>py-sip</tt> was updated to 4.19.2, PyQt4 to 4.12 and PyQt5 to
 	  5.7.1</li>
 
-	<li>Several fixes for ARMv6 were landed to the Qt4 and Qt5
+	<li>Several fixes for ARMv6 landed in the Qt4 and Qt5
 	  ports &mdash; thanks to Mikaël Urankar</li>
       </ul>
 
@@ -1654,8 +1653,8 @@
       <p>Some major version updates are: <tt>pkg</tt> 1.10.1, Firefox
 	54.0.1, and Chromium 59.0.3071.115.</p>
 
-      <p>Behind the scenes, antoine@ ran 36 exp-runs to test version updates,
-	making CRAN ports platform-independent, test installing
+      <p>Behind the scenes, antoine@ ran 36 exp-runs to test version
+	updates, making CRAN ports platform-independent, test installing
 	bsdgrep(1) as <tt>/usr/bin/grep</tt>, test LLVM updates, test
 	the ino64 project, and perform Makefile cleanups.</p>
     </body>
@@ -1750,7 +1749,7 @@
 	RAM.</p>
 
       <p>The default linker on arm64 is now <tt>lld</tt>.  This
-	means &os; is able to built itsself with just the components
+	means &os; is able to build itself with just the components
 	in the base system, a big milestone!</p>
     </body>
   </project>
@@ -1781,7 +1780,7 @@
 	also making slow progress to add support for even more
 	platforms.</p>
 
-      <p>Discussion has started upstream to support API/ABI breaking
+      <p>Discussion has started upstream to support API/ABI-breaking
 	changes between major releases of operating systems.  For
 	instance, this is required to be able to target both &os; 11.x
 	and 12.x, which have ABI changes involving important
@@ -1897,7 +1896,7 @@
 	Randomization (ASLR) as an initial focal point and is now
 	implementing further exploit mitigation techniques.</p>
 
-      <p>It has been a long while since HardenedBSD's laste appearance
+      <p>It has been a long while since HardenedBSD's last appearance
 	in a quarterly status report, with the last status report
 	being from December of 2015.  Accordingly, this status report
 	will be a long one!</p>
@@ -1941,7 +1940,7 @@
 	a number of high-profile ports in HardenedBSD's ports
 	tree.</p>
 
-      <p>In March of 2017, we added Control Flow Integrity (CFI) for
+      <p>In March of 2017, we added Control Flow Integrity (CFI) to
 	the base system.  CFI is an exploit mitigation technique that
 	helps prevent attackers from modifying the behavior of a
 	program and jumping to undefined or arbitrary memory
@@ -1970,12 +1969,12 @@
 	HardenedBSD's PaX SEGVGUARD implementation received a few
 	updates to make it more stable and performant.</p>
 
-      <p>In March of 2017, HardenedBSD is now accessible through a Tor
-	hidden service.  The main website, binary updates, and
+      <p>As of March 2017, HardenedBSD is now accessible through a
+	Tor hidden service.  The main website, binary updates, and
 	package distribution are all available over the hidden
 	service.</p>
 
-      <p>We now maintains our own version of the <tt>drm-next</tt>
+      <p>We now maintain our own version of the <tt>drm-next</tt>
 	branch for updated graphics support.  Binary updates are also
 	provided for this branch.</p>
 
@@ -2058,9 +2057,9 @@
 	well as locally adjusting the default version a lot
 	easier.</p>
 
-      <p><tt>gcc8-devel</tt> has been added, and armv6hf support removed, and we
-	made adjustments for newer versions of &os;.  Also of note are
-	various cleanups and changes to improve the robustness of our
+      <p><tt>gcc8-devel</tt> has been added, and armv6hf support removed,
+	and we made adjustments for newer versions of &os;.  Also of note
+	are various cleanups and changes to improve the robustness of our
 	packages and the addition of support for aarch64 to many
 	ports.</p>
 
@@ -2392,9 +2391,9 @@
 	Read more at <a
 	  href="https://www.FreeBSDfoundation.org/blog/conference-recap-oscon-2017/">https://www.FreeBSDfoundation.org/blog/conference-recap-oscon-2017/</a>.</p>
 
-      <p>RootConf 2017 (contributed by Philip Paeps)</p>
+      <p>Rootconf 2017 (contributed by Philip Paeps)</p>
 
-      <p>In mid-May I presented at Rootconf 2017  in Bangalore.
+      <p>In mid-May I presented at Rootconf 2017 in Bangalore.
 	Rootconf is India's principal conference where systems and
 	operations engineers share real world knowledge about
 	building reliable systems.  <a
@@ -2415,8 +2414,8 @@
 	without compromising availability.  Their spotswap <a
 	  href="https://github.com/mapbox/spotswap/">https://github.com/mapbox/spotswap/</a>
 	software has been released under a BSD license.  It sounds
-	like it should be possible to port this to &os; with minimal
-	effort.  Read more at <a
+	as though it should be possible to port this to &os; with
+	minimal effort.  Read more at <a
 	  href="https://www.FreeBSDfoundation.org/blog/rootconf-2017-trip-report-philip-paeps/">https://www.FreeBSDfoundation.org/blog/rootconf-2017-trip-report-philip-paeps/</a>.</p>
 
       <p>BSDCan 2017/&os; Developers Summit (contributed by Deb
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