Re: svn commit: r51330 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs: ipv6 multimedia portmgr

On Fri, Dec 22, 2017 at 08:43:22PM -0800, Eitan Adler wrote:
> On 22 December 2017 at 20:24, Benjamin Kaduk <[email protected]> wrote:
> > On Fri, Dec 22, 2017 at 05:48:44PM +0000, Eitan Adler wrote:
> >> Author: eadler
> >> Date: Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017
> >> New Revision: 51330
> >> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51330
> >>
> >> Log:
> >>   multiple: fix a few typos
> >>
> >>   - Duplicate words
> >>   - change -> chance
> >>   - insure -> ensure (this is actually an Americanism, but can confuse
> >>     some people)
> >>
> >> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml
> >> ==============================================================================
> >> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml       Fri Dec 22 14:48:00 2017        (r51329)
> >> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml       Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017        (r51330)
> >> @@ -13072,7 +13072,7 @@
> >>               on the system. One of the first problems presented
> >>               to the person who wants to tune the scheduler is
> >>               how to measure the effects of their changes. Simply
> >> -             tweaking the parameters and hoping that that will
> >> +             tweaking the parameters and hoping that will
> >
> > This "that that" was correct.  I am travelling; can you fix it?
> 
> I read this a few times. Switched to
> - tweaking the parameters and hoping that will
> + tweaking the parameters and hoping that the tweaks will

That looks good; thanks.

> 
> A fun sentence for you: Tim where Jim had had "had had" had had "had";
> "had had" had had a better effect on the teacher.

(Is it really "Tim", or "Time"?)

-Ben
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