svn commit: r51342 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs
Eitan Adler <[email protected]>
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Author: eadler Date: Wed Dec 27 11:32:11 2017 New Revision: 51342 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51342 Log: Front Page: wordsmith the description a bit Remove "advanced" which tells the user nothing, and is repeated later. Remove "computer" in front of "operating system" which is a given. "Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away" Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Wed Dec 27 11:22:49 2017 (r51341) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Wed Dec 27 11:32:11 2017 (r51342) @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ <div id="frontfeaturecontent"> <h1>The &os; Project</h1> - <p>&os; is an advanced computer + <p>&os; is an operating system used to power modern servers, desktops, and embedded _______________________________________________ [email protected] mailing list https://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-doc-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "[email protected]"