svn commit: r51414 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide

Author: wblock
Date: Sun Feb 11 19:52:22 2018
New Revision: 51414
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51414

Log:
  Spelling corrections, tense improvements, possessive removals, and the
  removal of one really weak and labored pun.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/Makefile
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/Makefile
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/Makefile	Sun Feb 11 05:50:22 2018	(r51413)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/Makefile	Sun Feb 11 19:52:22 2018	(r51414)
@@ -16,6 +16,9 @@ SRCS=	article.xml
 IMAGES_LIB=	callouts/1.png
 IMAGES_LIB+=	callouts/2.png
 IMAGES_LIB+=	callouts/3.png
+IMAGES_LIB+=	callouts/4.png
+IMAGES_LIB+=	callouts/5.png
+IMAGES_LIB+=	callouts/6.png
 
 URL_RELPREFIX?=	../../../..
 DOC_PREFIX?=	${.CURDIR}/../../..

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sun Feb 11 05:50:22 2018	(r51413)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sun Feb 11 19:52:22 2018	(r51414)
@@ -459,7 +459,7 @@ You need a Passphrase to protect your secret key.</scr
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>Committers can aquire an additional bit by the usual
+	  <para>Committers can acquire an additional bit by the usual
 	    process of finding a mentor who will propose them to core,
 	    doceng, or portmgr, as appropriate.  When approved, they
 	    will be added to 'access' and the normal mentoring period
@@ -2121,9 +2121,9 @@ U    stable/9/share/man/man4/netmap.4
 	  while and is finally committed back to the original branch.
 	  During development code migration in one direction (from
 	  head to the branch only).  No code is committed back to head
-	  until the end.  Once the branch is commited back at the end,
+	  until the end.  After the branch is committed back at the end,
 	  it is dead (although a new branch with the same name can be
-	  created after the dead one was deleted).</para>
+	  created after the dead one is deleted).</para>
 
 	<para>As per <link
 	    xlink:href="https://people.FreeBSD.org/~peter/svn_notes.txt">https://people.FreeBSD.org/~peter/svn_notes.txt</link>,
@@ -2677,7 +2677,7 @@ freebsd-mfc-after = 2 weeks</programlisting>
       <title>Commit Log for a Commit Bringing in Code from
 	OpenBSD</title>
 
-      <para>Commiting some code based on work done in the
+      <para>Committing some code based on work done in the
 	OpenBSD project.</para>
 
       <programlisting>...
@@ -4993,21 +4993,21 @@ Do you want to commit? (no = start a shell) [y/n]</scr
 	      &a.portmgr; is very protective of
 	      <filename>ports/Mk/bsd.port*.mk</filename> so do not
 	      commit changes to those files unless you want to face
-	      their wra(i)th.</para>
+	      their wrath.</para>
 	  </answer>
 	</qandaentry>
 
 	<qandaentry xml:id="ports-qa-misc-updated-distfile">
 	  <question>
 	    <para>What is the proper procedure for updating the
-	      checksum for a port's distfile when the file changes
+	      checksum for a port distfile when the file changes
 	      without a version change?</para>
 	  </question>
 
 	  <answer>
 	    <para>When the checksum for a distribution file is updated
 	      due to the author updating the file without changing the
-	      port's revision, the commit message includes a
+	      port revision, the commit message includes a
 	      summary of the relevant diffs between the original and
 	      new distfile to ensure that the distfile has not been
 	      corrupted or maliciously altered.  If the current
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