svn commit: r51915 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook: pkg-files plist special

Mathieu Arnold <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: mat
Date: Wed Jun 27 16:51:34 2018
New Revision: 51915
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51915

Log:
  Improve on r51913.
  
  Reviewed by:	adamw
  Sponsored by:	Absolight
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D16034

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/pkg-files/chapter.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/plist/chapter.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/pkg-files/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/pkg-files/chapter.xml	Wed Jun 27 16:39:34 2018	(r51914)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/pkg-files/chapter.xml	Wed Jun 27 16:51:34 2018	(r51915)
@@ -68,8 +68,8 @@
       <para>This script is here to help you set up the package so that
 	it is as ready to use as possible.  It <emphasis>must
 	  not</emphasis> be abused to start services, stop services,
-	or any other commands that will modify the currenly running
-	system.</para>
+	or run any other commands that will modify the currently
+	running system.</para>
     </important>
   </sect1>
 
@@ -93,8 +93,8 @@
       <para>This script is here to help you set up the package so that
 	it is as ready to use as possible.  It <emphasis>must
 	  not</emphasis> be abused to start services, stop services,
-	or any other commands that will modify the currenly running
-	system.</para>
+	or run any other commands that will modify the currently
+	running system.</para>
     </important>
   </sect1>
 

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/plist/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/plist/chapter.xml	Wed Jun 27 16:39:34 2018	(r51914)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/plist/chapter.xml	Wed Jun 27 16:51:34 2018	(r51915)
@@ -666,8 +666,8 @@ PLIST_SUB=	PERL_ARCH=mach</programlisting>
 	  <para>These keywords are here to help you set up the package
 	    so that it is as ready to use as possible.  They
 	    <emphasis>must not</emphasis> be abused to start services,
-	    stop services, or any other commands that will modify the
-	    currenly running system.</para>
+	    stop services, or run any other commands that will modify
+	    the currently running system.</para>
 	</important>
       </sect3>
 

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml	Wed Jun 27 16:39:34 2018	(r51914)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml	Wed Jun 27 16:51:34 2018	(r51915)
@@ -5563,11 +5563,11 @@ run_rc_command "$1"</programlisting>
 
     <important>
       <para>Ports <emphasis>must not</emphasis> start and stop
-	themselves when installing and deinstalling.  Do not abuse the
-	<filename>plist</filename> keywords described in <xref
-	  linkend="plist-keywords-base-exec"/> to run commands
-	starting services, stopping services, or any other commands
-	that will modify the currenly running system.</para>
+	their services when installing and deinstalling.  Do not abuse
+	the <filename>plist</filename> keywords described in <xref
+	  linkend="plist-keywords-base-exec"/> by running commands
+	that modify the currently running system, including starting
+	or stopping services.</para>
     </important>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="rc-scripts-checklist">
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