svn commit: r52072 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction

Eitan Adler <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: eadler
Date: Thu Aug  2 10:35:36 2018
New Revision: 52072
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/52072

Log:
  Introduction: use slightly more modern language

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Wed Aug  1 17:16:29 2018	(r52071)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Thu Aug  2 10:35:36 2018	(r52072)
@@ -198,10 +198,7 @@
 
 	  <itemizedlist>
 	    <listitem>
-	      <para>World Wide Web servers<indexterm>
-		  <primary>web servers</primary>
-		</indexterm>
-		(standard or secure [SSL])</para>
+	      <para>Web servers</para>
 	    </listitem>
 
 	    <listitem>
@@ -233,7 +230,7 @@
 		<indexterm>
 		  <primary>email</primary>
 		</indexterm>
-		Electronic Mail servers</para>
+		Email servers</para>
 	    </listitem>
 
 	    <listitem>
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