svn commit: r52159 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: bsdinstall config eresources
Benedict Reuschling <[email protected]>
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Author: bcr
Date: Sun Aug 19 12:09:31 2018
New Revision: 52159
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/52159
Log:
Re-wrap lines that went over the line limit.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Sun Aug 19 11:58:47 2018 (r52158)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Sun Aug 19 12:09:31 2018 (r52159)
@@ -77,37 +77,41 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Virtual Machine images, to download and
- import on a virtual environment of choice.
- These can be downloaded from the
- <link xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/where.html">Download FreeBSD</link>
- page. There are images for KVM (<quote>qcow2</quote>),
- VMWare (<quote>vmdk</quote>), Hyper-V (<quote>vhd</quote>),
- and raw device images that are universally supported.
- These are not installation images, but rather the
- preconfigured (<quote>already installed</quote>) instances,
- ready to run and perform post-installation tasks.</para>
+ <para>Virtual Machine images, to download and import on a
+ virtual environment of choice. These can be downloaded from
+ the <link
+ xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/where.html">Download
+ FreeBSD</link> page. There are images for KVM
+ (<quote>qcow2</quote>), VMWare (<quote>vmdk</quote>),
+ Hyper-V (<quote>vhd</quote>), and raw device images that are
+ universally supported. These are not installation images,
+ but rather the preconfigured (<quote>already
+ installed</quote>) instances, ready to run and perform
+ post-installation tasks.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Virtual Machine images available at Amazon's
- <link xlink:href="https://aws.amazon.com/mp/solutions/freebsd/">AWS Marketplace</link>,
- <link xlink:href="https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com/en-us/marketplace/apps?search=freebsd&page=1">Microsoft Azure Marketplace</link>,
- and <link xlink:href="https://console.cloud.google.com/launcher/details/freebsd-cloud/freebsd-11">Google Cloud Platform</link>,
- to run on their respective hosting services.
- For more information on deploying &os;
- on Azure please consult the relevant chapter in the
- <link xlink:href="https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/virtual-machines/linux/freebsd-intro-on-azure">Azure Documentation</link>.</para>
+ <para>Virtual Machine images available at Amazon's <link
+ xlink:href="https://aws.amazon.com/mp/solutions/freebsd/">AWS
+ Marketplace</link>, <link
+ xlink:href="https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com/en-us/marketplace/apps?search=freebsd&page=1">Microsoft
+ Azure Marketplace</link>, and <link
+ xlink:href="https://console.cloud.google.com/launcher/details/freebsd-cloud/freebsd-11">Google
+ Cloud Platform</link>, to run on their respective hosting
+ services. For more information on deploying &os; on Azure
+ please consult the relevant chapter in the <link
+ xlink:href="https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/virtual-machines/linux/freebsd-intro-on-azure">Azure
+ Documentation</link>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>SD card images, for embedded systems such
- as Raspberry Pi or BeagleBone Black. These can be
- downloaded from the
- <link xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/where.html">Download FreeBSD</link>
- page. These files must be uncompressed and written
- as a raw image to an SD card, from which the board will
- then boot.</para>
+ <para>SD card images, for embedded systems such as Raspberry
+ Pi or BeagleBone Black. These can be downloaded from the
+ <link
+ xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/where.html">Download
+ FreeBSD</link> page. These files must be uncompressed and
+ written as a raw image to an SD card, from which the board
+ will then boot.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -532,7 +536,7 @@
<acronym>USB</acronym> stick using the instructions
below.</para>
</listitem>
-
+
<listitem>
<para><literal>-mini-memstick.img</literal>: Like
<literal>-bootonly.iso</literal>, does not include
@@ -1255,8 +1259,8 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4.</s
<para>The <filename>/usr</filename> partition holds many of the
files which support the system, including the &os; Ports
- Collection and system source code. At least 2 gigabytes of space is
- recommended for this partition.</para>
+ Collection and system source code. At least 2 gigabytes of
+ space is recommended for this partition.</para>
<para>When selecting partition sizes, keep the space
requirements in mind. Running out of space in one partition
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Sun Aug 19 11:58:47 2018 (r52158)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Sun Aug 19 12:09:31 2018 (r52159)
@@ -973,8 +973,8 @@ lo0: flags=8049<UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,MULTICAST> m
<programlisting>ifconfig_dc0="DHCP"</programlisting>
- <para>Replace <replaceable>dc0</replaceable> with the correct value
- for the system.</para>
+ <para>Replace <replaceable>dc0</replaceable> with the correct
+ value for the system.</para>
<para>The line added, then, follow the instructions given in
<xref linkend="config-network-testing"/>.</para>
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.xml Sun Aug 19 11:58:47 2018 (r52158)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.xml Sun Aug 19 12:09:31 2018 (r52159)
@@ -282,12 +282,14 @@
<row>
<entry>&a.dev-ci.name;</entry>
- <entry>Build and test reports from the Continuous Integration servers</entry>
+ <entry>Build and test reports from the Continuous
+ Integration servers</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry>&a.dev-reviews.name;</entry>
- <entry>Notifications of the FreeBSD review system</entry>
+ <entry>Notifications of the FreeBSD review
+ system</entry>
</row>
<row>
@@ -394,10 +396,11 @@
<entry>General technical discussion</entry>
</row>
- <row>
+ <row>
<entry>&a.haskell.name;</entry>
- <entry>&os;-specific Haskell issues and discussions</entry>
- </row>
+ <entry>&os;-specific Haskell issues and
+ discussions</entry>
+ </row>
<row>
<entry>&a.hardware.name;</entry>
@@ -1259,18 +1262,22 @@
<varlistentry>
<term>&a.dev-ci.name;</term>
<listitem>
- <para><emphasis>Continuous Integration reports of build and test results</emphasis></para>
+ <para><emphasis>Continuous Integration reports of build
+ and test results</emphasis></para>
- <para>All Continuous Integration reports of build and test results</para>
+ <para>All Continuous Integration reports of build and test
+ results</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
<term>&a.dev-reviews.name;</term>
<listitem>
- <para><emphasis>Notifications of work in progress in FreeBSD's review tool</emphasis></para>
+ <para><emphasis>Notifications of work in progress in
+ FreeBSD's review tool</emphasis></para>
- <para>Automated notifications of work in progress for review in FreeBSD's review tools, including
+ <para>Automated notifications of work in progress for
+ review in FreeBSD's review tools, including
patches.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
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