svn commit: r53242 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng
John Baldwin <[email protected]>
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Author: jhb
Date: Tue Jul 9 23:59:30 2019
New Revision: 53242
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53242
Log:
A few more wording tweaks to the section on ENs.
- Use "revisions from the stable/ branch" instead of
"revisions against the stable/ branch".
- Use "the <foo> team".
Reviewed by: gjb
Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D20902
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml Tue Jul 9 20:26:04 2019 (r53241)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml Tue Jul 9 23:59:30 2019 (r53242)
@@ -473,15 +473,15 @@
<para>The completed Errata Notice template should be emailed
together with either a patch against the &branch.releng;
- branch or a list of revisions against the &branch.stable;
+ branch or a list of revisions from the &branch.stable;
branch.</para>
<para>For Errata Notice requests immediately following the
- release, the request should be emailed to both &team.re; and
- &team.secteam;. Once the &branch.releng; branch has been
- handed over to &team.secteam; as described in <xref
+ release, the request should be emailed to both the &team.re; and
+ the &team.secteam;. Once the &branch.releng; branch has been
+ handed over to the &team.secteam; as described in <xref
linkend="releng-wrapup-handoff"/>, Errata Notice requests
- should be sent to &team.secteam;.</para>
+ should be sent to the &team.secteam;.</para>
</sect2>
<sect2 xml:id="releng-wrapup-handoff">
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