svn commit: r53310 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security

Ed Maste <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: emaste (src committer)
Date: Mon Aug 19 19:11:45 2019
New Revision: 53310
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53310

Log:
  Rework advisory "Perform one of the following" text
  
  We keep making this change to each EN/SA.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/advisory-template.txt
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/errata-template.txt

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/advisory-template.txt
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/advisory-template.txt	Mon Aug 19 13:26:11 2019	(r53309)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/advisory-template.txt	Mon Aug 19 19:11:45 2019	(r53310)
@@ -50,14 +50,14 @@ V.   Solution
 
 <insert solution here>
 
-Perform one of the following:
-
-1) Upgrade your vulnerable system to a supported FreeBSD stable or
+Upgrade your vulnerable system to a supported FreeBSD stable or
 release / security branch (releng) dated after the correction date.
 [XX Needs reboot? Mention please]
 
-2) To update your vulnerable system via a binary patch:
+Perform one of the following:
 
+1) To update your vulnerable system via a binary patch:
+
 Systems running a RELEASE version of FreeBSD on the i386 or amd64
 platforms can be updated via the freebsd-update(8) utility:
 
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ platforms can be updated via the freebsd-update(8) uti
 # freebsd-update install
 # shutdown -r +10min "Rebooting for a security update" <XX if required>
 
-3) To update your vulnerable system via a source code patch:
+2) To update your vulnerable system via a source code patch:
 
 The following patches have been verified to apply to the applicable
 FreeBSD release branches.

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/errata-template.txt
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/errata-template.txt	Mon Aug 19 13:26:11 2019	(r53309)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/errata-template.txt	Mon Aug 19 19:11:45 2019	(r53310)
@@ -50,14 +50,14 @@ V.   Solution
 
 <insert solution here>
 
-Perform one of the following:
-
-1) Upgrade your system to a supported FreeBSD stable or release / security
+Upgrade your system to a supported FreeBSD stable or release / security
 branch (releng) dated after the correction date.
 [XX Needs reboot? Mention please]
 
-2) To update your system via a binary patch:
+Perform one of the following:
 
+1) To update your system via a binary patch:
+
 Systems running a RELEASE version of FreeBSD on the i386 or amd64
 platforms can be updated via the freebsd-update(8) utility:
 
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ platforms can be updated via the freebsd-update(8) uti
 # freebsd-update install
 [XX Needs reboot? Mention please]
 
-3) To update your system via a source code patch:
+2) To update your system via a source code patch:
 
 The following patches have been verified to apply to the applicable
 FreeBSD release branches.
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