svn commit: r53655 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config
Chris Rees <[email protected]>
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Author: crees Date: Wed Dec 4 11:53:12 2019 New Revision: 53655 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53655 Log: Simplify language by removing spurious comma. While here, "must" conjugates with plural as well as singular. PR: docs/241674 Submitted by: PauAmma <[email protected]> Reviewed by: bcr (first point) Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D22648 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Wed Dec 4 10:02:19 2019 (r53654) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Wed Dec 4 11:53:12 2019 (r53655) @@ -986,8 +986,8 @@ lo0: flags=8049<UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,MULTICAST> m before adding any lines.</para> </note> - <para>In the case, there is no <acronym>DHCP</acronym> server, - the <acronym>NIC</acronym>(s) have to be configured manually. + <para>If there is no <acronym>DHCP</acronym> server, + the <acronym>NIC</acronym>(s) must be configured manually. Add a line for each <acronym>NIC</acronym> present on the system, as seen in this example:</para> _______________________________________________ [email protected] mailing list https://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-doc-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "[email protected]"