svn commit: r53817 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1: articles/freebsd-questions books/faq

Author: carlavilla
Date: Sat Jan 25 19:19:19 2020
New Revision: 53817
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53817

Log:
  Minor Style Guide Corrections in the FAQ and freebsd-questions article
  
  PR:		223679
  Submitted by:	[email protected]
  Approved by:	bcr@(mentor)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D23361

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.xml	Sat Jan 25 18:42:34 2020	(r53816)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.xml	Sat Jan 25 19:19:19 2020	(r53817)
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ You can also make such adjustments via email by sendin
 
   [email protected]
 
-with the word `help' in the subject or body (don't include the
+with the word 'help' in the subject or body (do not include the
 quotes), and you will get back a message with instructions.
 
 You must know your password to change your options (including changing

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sat Jan 25 18:42:34 2020	(r53816)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sat Jan 25 19:19:19 2020	(r53817)
@@ -2949,9 +2949,8 @@ kern.sched.name: ULE</screen>
 
 	<answer>
 	  <para>Install LILO at the start of the &linux; boot
-	    partition instead of in the Master Boot Record.  You can
-	    then boot LILO from
-	    <application>BootEasy</application>.</para>
+	    partition instead of in the Master Boot Record.  Then boot
+	    LILO from <application>BootEasy</application>.</para>
 
 	  <para>This is recommended when running &windows; and &linux;
 	    as it makes it simpler to get &linux; booting again if
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