Re: svn commit: r53958 - in head: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall share/images/books/handbook/bsdinstall

On 08.03.2020 10:39, Sergio Carlavilla Delgado wrote:
> Author: carlavilla
> Date: Sun Mar  8 10:39:30 2020
> New Revision: 53958
> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53958
> 
> Log:
>   Add the hardening section to the handbook
>   
>   Submitted by:	carlavilla@
>   Approved by:	bcr@
>   Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D23996
> 
> Added:
>   head/share/images/books/handbook/bsdinstall/bsdinstall-hardening.png   (contents, props changed)
> Modified:
>   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile
>   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
>   head/share/images/books/handbook/bsdinstall/bsdinstall-finalconfiguration.png
> 
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile	Sat Mar  7 20:37:19 2020	(r53957)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile	Sun Mar  8 10:39:30 2020	(r53958)
> @@ -64,6 +64,7 @@ IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-distfile-verifying.p
>  IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-final-confirmation.png
>  IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-finalconfiguration.png
>  IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-final-modification-shell.png
> +IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-hardening.png
>  IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-keymap-10.png
>  IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-keymap-loading.png
>  IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-keymap-select-default.png
> 
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Sat Mar  7 20:37:19 2020	(r53957)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Sun Mar  8 10:39:30 2020	(r53958)
> @@ -939,7 +939,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4.</s
>  	</mediaobject>
>        </figure>
>  
> -      <para>After the keymaps have been loaded <application>bsdinstall</application> displays the
> +      <para>After the keymaps have been loaded bsdinstall displays the

This reverts r53949.  Please readd it.


>  	menu shown in <xref linkend="bsdinstall-keymap-10"/>.  Use the
>  	up and down arrows to select the keymap that most closely
>  	represents the mapping of the keyboard attached to the system.
> @@ -2308,7 +2308,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4.</s
>  	  <para><literal>ntpdate</literal> - Enable the automatic
>  	    clock synchronization at boot time.  The functionality of
>  	    this program is now available in the ntpd daemon.  After a

                                                ^^^^ &man.ntdp.8; should
						be used there.

> -	    suitable period of mourning, the &man.ntpd.8; utility will
> +	    suitable period of mourning, the &man.ntpdate.8; utility will
>  	    be retired.</para>
>  	</listitem>
>  
[...]

-- 
Marc
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