git: c4e48b65b7 - main - 13.1 relnotes: Change previous entries to avoid imperative.

Mike Karels <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
The branch main has been updated by karels (src committer):

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=c4e48b65b76ff0ae15de17969d152233eeac83c4

commit c4e48b65b76ff0ae15de17969d152233eeac83c4
Author:     Mike Karels <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: 2022-04-12 21:40:17 +0000
Commit:     Mike Karels <[email protected]>
CommitDate: 2022-04-13 01:32:44 +0000

    13.1 relnotes: Change previous entries to avoid imperative.
    
    Change previous entries from "Add ..." to "... has been added",
    etc, for consistency.
    
    Reviewed by:    pauamma_gundo.com
    Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D34892
---
 website/content/en/releases/13.1R/relnotes.adoc | 38 +++++++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 23 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/relnotes.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/relnotes.adoc
index fdc4743f48..da155297d7 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/relnotes.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/relnotes.adoc
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ It may be disabled using the `WITHOUT_PIE` knob.
 A clean build is required.
 gitref:396e9f259d96[repository=src]
 
-Add a new `zfskeys` man:rc[8] service script, which allows for automatic decryption of ZFS datasets encrypted with ZFS native encryption during boot.
+There is a new `zfskeys` man:rc[8] service script, which allows for automatic decryption of ZFS datasets encrypted with ZFS native encryption during boot.
 See the man:rc.conf[5] manual page for more information.
 gitref:33ff39796ffe[repository=src], gitref:8719e8a951b7[repository=src] (Sponsored by Modirum and Klara Inc.)
 
@@ -157,7 +157,8 @@ hardware or VMs with varying disk names. gitref:5ec4eb443e81[repository=src]
 [[userland-contrib]]
 === Contributed Software
 
-Enable building LLDB on all powerpc architectures. gitref:cb1bee9bd34[repository=src]
+Building of LLDB has been enabled on all powerpc architectures.
+gitref:cb1bee9bd34[repository=src]
 
 One True Awk has been updated to the latest from upstream
 (20210215). All the FreeBSD patches but one have now been
@@ -199,18 +200,19 @@ gitref:a613d68fff9a[repository=src]
 [[userland-libraries]]
 === Runtime Libraries and API
 
-Add assembly optimized code for OpenSSL on powerpc, powerpc64 and powerpc64le. gitref:ce35a3bc852[repository=src]
+Assembly optimized code for OpenSSL has been added on powerpc, powerpc64 and powerpc64le. gitref:ce35a3bc852[repository=src]
 
 The detection of CPU features accelerating crypto operations for ARMv7 and
 ARM64 has been fixed, speeding up `aes-256-gcm` and `sha256` substantially.
 gitref:32a2fed6e71f[repository=src]
 (Sponsored by Ampere Computing LLC and Klara Inc.)
 
-Enable building ASAN and UBSAN libraries on riscv64 and riscv64sf. gitref:8c56b338da7[repository=src]
+Building ASAN and UBSAN libraries has been enabled on riscv64 and riscv64sf.
+gitref:8c56b338da7[repository=src]
 
-Enable building OFED libraries on riscv64 and riscv64sf. gitref:2b978245733[repository=src]
+OFED libraries are now built on riscv64 and riscv64sf. gitref:2b978245733[repository=src]
 
-Enable building OPENMP libraries on riscv64 and riscv64sf. gitref:aaf56e35569[repository=src]
+OPENMP libraries are now built on riscv64 and riscv64sf. gitref:aaf56e35569[repository=src]
 
 [[kernel]]
 == Kernel
@@ -220,13 +222,15 @@ This section covers changes to kernel configurations, system tuning, and system
 [[kernel-general]]
 === General Kernel Changes
 
-Fix output corruption on serial console on powerpc64. gitref:dca829138ca[repository=src]
+Output corruption on serial console on powerpc64 has been fixed. gitref:dca829138ca[repository=src]
 
-Change CAS to support Radix MMU. gitref:cc8e726c85b[repository=src]
+CAS has been changed to support Radix MMU. gitref:cc8e726c85b[repository=src]
 
-Fix running FreeBSD with HPT superpages enabled on QEMU with TCG on powerpc64(le). gitref:f05174ed354[repository=src]
+Running FreeBSD with HPT superpages enabled on QEMU with TCG has been fixed
+ on powerpc64(le). gitref:f05174ed354[repository=src]
 
-Add superpages support to pmap_mincore on powerpc64(le). gitref:32b50b8520d[repository=src]
+Superpages support has been added to pmap_mincore on powerpc64(le).
+gitref:32b50b8520d[repository=src]
 
 HWCAP/HWCAP2 aux args support was added on arm64 for 32-bit ARM binaries.
 This fixes build/run of golang under `COMPAT32` emulation.
@@ -247,13 +251,16 @@ tx/rx checksum offload, TSO, LRO, and multi-queue operation.
 gitref:d7388d33b4dd[repository=src]
 (Sponsored by Rubicon Communications, LLC ("Netgate"))
 
-Fix for VGA / HDMI console with AST2500 during boot on powerpc64(le). gitref:c41d129485e[repository=src]
+A fix for VGA / HDMI console with AST2500 during boot on powerpc64(le)
+has been added. gitref:c41d129485e[repository=src]
 
-Fix PCI common read/write functions on big endian targets in man:virtio[4]. gitref:7e583075a41[repository=src], gitref:8d589845881[repository=src]
+PCI common read/write functions are fixed on big endian targets in man:virtio[4]. gitref:7e583075a41[repository=src], gitref:8d589845881[repository=src]
 
-Add big-endian support to man:mpr[4]. gitref:7d45bf699dc[repository=src], gitref:2954aedb8e5[repository=src], gitref:c80a1c1072d[repository=src]
+Big-endian support has been added to man:mpr[4].
+gitref:7d45bf699dc[repository=src], gitref:2954aedb8e5[repository=src], gitref:c80a1c1072d[repository=src]
 
-Reduce max I/O size to avoid DMA issues in man:aacraid[4]. gitref:572e3575dba[repository=src]
+Max I/O size has been reduced to avoid DMA issues in man:aacraid[4].
+gitref:572e3575dba[repository=src]
 
 A bug preventing a virtual guest using man:virtio_random[8] from shutting
 down or rebooting has been fixed. gitref:fa67c45842bb[repository=src]
@@ -346,7 +353,8 @@ This section covers the boot loader, boot menu, and other boot-related changes.
 [[boot-loader]]
 === Boot Loader Changes
 
-Fix boot1 and loader on powerpc64le. gitref:8a62b07bce7[repository=src]
+`boot1` and `loader` have been fixed on powerpc64le.
+gitref:8a62b07bce7[repository=src]
 
 [[boot-process]]
 === Other Boot Changes
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