git: e94c4fa05e - main - 12.4 Release notes: Fix types and syntax.

Fernando Apesteguía <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
The branch main has been updated by fernape:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=e94c4fa05ea0f02ee8ca3288169a23ca56fa8b1f

commit e94c4fa05ea0f02ee8ca3288169a23ca56fa8b1f
Author:     Fernando Apesteguía <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: 2022-11-12 18:25:47 +0000
Commit:     Fernando Apesteguía <[email protected]>
CommitDate: 2022-11-12 18:25:47 +0000

    12.4 Release notes: Fix types and syntax.
    
    Reported by:    pauamma@
---
 website/content/en/releases/12.4R/relnotes.adoc | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/12.4R/relnotes.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/12.4R/relnotes.adoc
index 313f035da4..08b810078a 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/12.4R/relnotes.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/12.4R/relnotes.adoc
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ The man:nfsd[8] utility had a bug fixed when handling of Open/Create for the pNF
 
 The man:sh[1] utility will now read more profile files. It will load each .sh file in /etc/profile.d, then /usr/local/etc/profile, then each .sh file in /usr/local/etc/profile.d/.
 
-The man:usbconfig[8] utility has been improved by adding a `-v` flag, it uses man:getopt[3] to handle options and the manual page has been also improved.
+The man:usbconfig[8] utility has been improved by adding a `-v` flag, it uses man:getopt[3] to handle options, and the manual page has been also improved.
 
 [[userland-contrib]]
 === Contributed Software
@@ -212,17 +212,17 @@ The vm subsystem had a problem fixed that broke the vm reservation when it was m
 [[drivers-device]]
 === Device Drivers
 
-The man:aesni[4] driver for the AES and SHA accelerator on x86 CPUs had a bug fixed about a potential out-of-bounds.
+The man:aesni[4] driver for the AES and SHA accelerator on x86 CPUs had a bug fixed about a potential out-of-bounds access.
 
 The man:aw_spi[4] driver for the SPI controller in Allwinner SoC has improved I/O stability regarding TX FIFO underruns and RX FIFO overflows.
 
 The man:carp[4] protocol now gracefully deals with negative values of `net.inet.carp.demotion`.
 
-The man:ena[4] kernel driver as been updated to 2.6.1.
+The man:ena[4] kernel driver has been updated to 2.6.1.
 
 The man:if_epair[4] driver now  allows multiple cores to be used to process traffic to improve performance.
 
-The man:if_gif[4] tunnel interfaze had a panic on shutdown fixed.
+The man:if_gif[4] tunnel interface had a panic on shutdown fixed.
 
 The man:if_pflog[4] device had a bug fixed regarding packet length.
 
@@ -234,11 +234,11 @@ The man:ixl[4] driver had some fixes for VLAN HW filtering and fixed some panics
 
 The man:mpr[4] and man:mps[4] drivers had some panic fixed and a more robust device mapping has been implemented.
 
-The man:ocs_fc[4] device driver had a user-after-free bug fixed along with some memory leaks.
+The man:ocs_fc[4] device driver had a use-after-free bug fixed along with some memory leaks.
 
 The man:pfsync[4] pseudo-device had some locking, defer mode and NULL check bug fixed.
 
-The man:random[4] device had some improvements that now make entroypy sources deregistration-safe. On x86 prefer RDSEED over RDRAND when available as per Intel documentation.
+The man:random[4] device had some improvements that now make entropy sources deregistration-safe. On x86 prefer RDSEED over RDRAND when available as per Intel documentation.
 
 The man:rk_i2c[4] driver had a number of improvements including the increasing of the number of bytes that can be sent to 32.
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