git: b158d161c0 - main - handbook/bsdinstall: minor rewording of install guidance

The branch main has been updated by ceri:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=b158d161c04e7a69b2e67cac5b9a0567bc5e9f8e

commit b158d161c04e7a69b2e67cac5b9a0567bc5e9f8e
Author:     Ceri Davies <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: 2023-01-15 17:13:09 +0000
Commit:     Ceri Davies <[email protected]>
CommitDate: 2023-01-15 17:13:09 +0000

    handbook/bsdinstall: minor rewording of install guidance
---
 documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc
index bc1bb8da48..8792882f2e 100644
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc
@@ -848,7 +848,7 @@ If a wireless network interface is chosen, the system will instead scan for wire
 .Scanning for Wireless Access Points
 image::bsdinstall-configure-wireless-scan.png[Menu showing wireless network scanning.]
 
-Wireless networks are identified by a Service Set Identifier (SSID), a short, unique name given to each network.
+Wireless networks are identified by a Service Set Identifier (SSID); a short, unique name given to each network.
 SSIDs found during the scan are listed, followed by a description of the encryption types available for that network.
 If the desired SSID does not appear in the list, select btn:[Rescan] to scan again.
 If the desired network still does not appear, check for problems with antenna connections or try moving the computer closer to the access point.
@@ -887,7 +887,7 @@ If a DHCP server is available, select btn:[Yes] in the next menu to automaticall
 The installer will appear to pause for a minute or so as it finds the DHCP server and obtains the addressing information for the system.
 
 [[bsdinstall-net-ipv4-dhcp]]
-.Choose IPv4DHCP Configuration
+.Choose IPv4 DHCP Configuration
 image::bsdinstall-configure-network-interface-ipv4-dhcp.png[Menu indicating if DHCP wants to be configured for the selected interface.]
 
 If a DHCP server is not available, select btn:[No] and input the following addressing information in this menu:
@@ -1004,11 +1004,11 @@ image::bsdinstall-config-services.png[Menu showing the different services availa
 
 Here is a summary of the services that can be enabled in this menu:
 
-* `local_unbound` - Enable the DNS local unbound. It is necessary to keep in mind that this is the unbound of the base system and is only meant for use as a local caching forwarding resolver. If the objective is to set up a resolver for the entire network install package:dns/unbound[].
+* `local_unbound` - Enable the DNS local unbound. It is necessary to keep in mind that this is a configuration only meant for use as a local caching forwarding resolver. If the objective is to set up a resolver for the entire network, install package:dns/unbound[].
 * `sshd` - The Secure Shell (SSH) daemon is used to remotely access a system over an encrypted connection. Only enable this service if the system should be available for remote logins.
 * `moused` - Enable this service if the mouse will be used from the command-line system console.
-* `ntpdate` - Enable the automatic clock synchronization at boot time. The functionality of this program is now available in the man:ntpd[8] daemon. After a suitable period of mourning, the man:ntpdate[8] utility will be retired.
-* `ntpd` - The Network Time Protocol (NTP) daemon for automatic clock synchronization. Enable this service if there is a Windows(R), Kerberos, LDAP server on the network, or to use a remote server pool is desired.
+* `ntpdate` - Enable automatic clock synchronization at boot time. Note that the functionality of this program is now available in the man:ntpd[8] daemon and the man:ntpdate[8] utility will soon be retired.
+* `ntpd` - The Network Time Protocol (NTP) daemon for automatic clock synchronization. Enable this service if you wish to synchronise your system clock with a remote time server or pool.
 * `powerd` - System power control utility for power control and energy saving.
 * `dumpdev` - Crash dumps are useful when debugging issues with the system, so users are encouraged to enable them.