git: 20e74b2690 - main - Light copyedit of draft 13.2 relnotes

The branch main has been updated by pauamma:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=20e74b2690a9c7d0c8226907d3e89fb49238bb36

commit 20e74b2690a9c7d0c8226907d3e89fb49238bb36
Author:     Pau Amma <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: 2023-02-14 22:48:10 +0000
Commit:     Pau Amma <[email protected]>
CommitDate: 2023-02-15 17:10:26 +0000

    Light copyedit of draft 13.2 relnotes
    
    Discussed with delphij.
    
    Reviewed by:    delphij, karels, carlavilla
    Approved by:    delphij (releng), carlavilla (mentor)
    Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D38598
---
 website/content/en/releases/13.2R/relnotes.adoc | 34 ++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/relnotes.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/relnotes.adoc
index 77abf900c0..3a0889b5a1 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/relnotes.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/relnotes.adoc
@@ -97,38 +97,38 @@ This section covers changes and additions to userland applications, contributed
 // A new man:rc.conf[5] variable has been added, `linux_mounts_enable`, which controls if Linux(R)-specific filesystems are mounted in [.filename]#/compat/linux# if `linux_enable` is set to `YES`. {{< revision "364883" >}} (Sponsored by The FreeBSD Foundation)
 
 A new man:rc.conf[5] variable has been added, `growfs_swap_size`, which controls
-the size of swap partition created by the `growfs` startup script as documented
+the size of the swap partition created by the `growfs` startup script as documented
 in man:growfs[7].
 
 A new RC script, `zpoolreguid` has been added, which will assign a new GUID to
 one or more zpools, useful for virtualization environments when sharing datasets.
 
-A new RC script, `machine_id` has been added, which will generate `/etc/machine-id`
+A new RC script, `machine_id` has been added, which will generate the `/etc/machine-id`
 file if it does not exist. The file is used by some libraries like GLib.
 gitref:17333d92643d[repository=src]
 
-It is now possible to add default routes for other FIBs by using `defaultrouter_fibN`
-and `ipv6_defaultrouter_fibN`  man:rc.conf[5] variables.
+It is now possible to add default routes for other FIBs by using the `defaultrouter_fibN`
+and `ipv6_defaultrouter_fibN` man:rc.conf[5] variables.
 gitref:c6ec1b441ad3[repository=src]
 (Sponsored by ScaleEngine Inc.)
 
 [[userland-programs]]
 === Userland Application Changes
 
-man:bhyve[8] has gained a virtio-input device emulation support.
+The man:bhyve[8] utility has gained a virtio-input device emulation support.
 This will be used to inject keyboard/mouse input events into a guest.
 The command line syntax is: `-s <slot>,virtio-input,/dev/input/eventX`
 gitref:6192776124c5[repository=src]
 
-The man:kdump[1] has gained support of decoding Linux system calls.
+The man:kdump[1] utility has gained support for decoding Linux system calls.
 
-The man:killall[1] utility now allow sending signals to processes with
-control terminal on pts(4).
+The man:killall[1] utility now allows sending signals to processes with
+their control terminal on pts(4).
 gitref:a76fa7bb6cb7[repository=src]
 
-The man:timeout[1] has been moved from /usr/bin to /bin.
+The man:timeout[1] utility has been moved from /usr/bin to /bin.
 
-The man:pciconf[8] utility added support of decoding ACS extended capability.
+The man:pciconf[8] utility added support for decoding ACS extended capability.
 gitref:dde4103a465b[repository=src]
 (Sponsored by Chelsio Communications)
 
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ The man:procstat[1] utility can now print information about advisory locks on
 files with the newly added `advlock` command.
 gitref:f9daaf452a8a[repository=src]
 
-The man:pwd_mkdb[8] no longer copies comments from `/etc/master.passwd`
+The man:pwd_mkdb[8] utility no longer copies comments from `/etc/master.passwd`
 to `/etc/passwd`.
 gitref:3e955733117d[repository=src]
 
@@ -208,10 +208,10 @@ This section covers changes to kernel configurations, system tuning, and system
 [[kernel-general]]
 === General Kernel Changes
 
-The man:bhyve[8] now supports more than 16 vCPUs in a guest.  By default
+The man:bhyve[8] utility now supports more than 16 vCPUs in a guest.  By default
 bhyve permits each guest to create the same number of vCPUs as
 the count of physical CPUs on the host.  This limit can be
-adjusted via the loader tunable `hw.vmm.maxcpu``.
+adjusted via the loader tunable `hw.vmm.maxcpu`.
 gitref:3e02f8809aec[repository=src]
 
 Address Space Layout Randomization (ASLR) is enabled for 64-bit executables
@@ -227,8 +227,8 @@ This section covers changes and additions to devices and device drivers since {r
 [[drivers-device]]
 === Device Drivers
 
-Receiving buffer size for man:em[4] was extended to 32b to allow proper
-setting of the receiving buffer watermarks.
+The man:em[4] driver now correctly supports the full range of receive buffer
+sizes available on newer chips 82580 and i350.
 gitref:3f8306cf8e2d[repository=src]
 
 The man:ena[4] driver has been upgraded to version 2.6.2.
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ This section describes changes that affect networking in FreeBSD.
 [[network-general]]
 === General Network
 
-WireGuard driver has been added.
+The man:wg[4] WireGuard driver has been added.
 gitref:5ae69e2f10da[repository=src]
 (Sponsored by The FreeBSD Foundation)
 
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ gitref:5ae69e2f10da[repository=src]
 
 `OPIE` has been deprecated and will be removed in FreeBSD 14.0.
 
-The man:ce[4] and man:cp[4] sync serial drivers has been deprecated and will be
+The man:ce[4] and man:cp[4] synchronous serial drivers have been deprecated and will be
 removed in FreeBSD 14.0.
 
 The man:minigzip[1] utility has been deprecated and will be removed in FreeBSD 14.0.