git: 99b12bd1c2 - main - FreeBSD Handbook: fix and improve a pair of warnings

Graham Perrin <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
The branch main has been updated by grahamperrin:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=99b12bd1c23d519bbf275d04591b7bed75fef3c3

commit 99b12bd1c23d519bbf275d04591b7bed75fef3c3
Author:     Graham Perrin <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: 2023-07-10 04:53:40 +0000
Commit:     Graham Perrin <[email protected]>
CommitDate: 2023-07-13 03:10:50 +0000

    FreeBSD Handbook: fix and improve a pair of warnings
    
    Installing Applications: Packages and Ports – Overview of Software
    Installation – Warning
    
    Fix the word doubling (use use) that was found by Mohammadreza in the
    second warning in db3bba9456.
    
    Whilst here:
    
    - make the first of the two warnings more concise
    
    - reword the second warning, to be consistent with the NAME of
      pkg-audit(8).
    
    Reported-by:  Mohammadreza (GitHub user slash071)
    Fixes:        db3bba9456 handbook: Wordsmith a fragment about pkg-audit(8)
    Pull-request: https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-doc/pull/216
---
 documentation/content/en/books/handbook/ports/_index.adoc | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/ports/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/ports/_index.adoc
index 4690379e63..001dc7a831 100644
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/ports/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/ports/_index.adoc
@@ -105,9 +105,9 @@ To keep track of updated ports, subscribe to the {freebsd-ports} and the {freebs
 
 [WARNING]
 ====
-Before installing an application, check https://vuxml.freebsd.org/[] for security issues related to the application.
+Before installing an application, check https://vuxml.freebsd.org/[] for related security issues.
 
-To check for known vulnerabilities of installed applications use use `pkg audit -F`.
+To audit installed packages against known vulnerabilities, run `pkg audit -F`.
 ====
 
 The remainder of this chapter explains how to use packages and ports to install and manage third-party software on FreeBSD.
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