git: 52b12917f8 - main - Status/2023Q3/mfsbsd.adoc: Fixes

The branch main has been updated by salvadore:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=52b12917f82f1494548164e0a93d46de6a62c073

commit 52b12917f82f1494548164e0a93d46de6a62c073
Author:     Graham Perrin <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: 2023-09-28 12:27:13 +0000
Commit:     Lorenzo Salvadore <[email protected]>
CommitDate: 2023-09-28 12:27:13 +0000

    Status/2023Q3/mfsbsd.adoc: Fixes
    
    Approved by:    soobinrho (report author)
    Pull Request:   https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-doc/pull/257
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 .../en/status/report-2023-07-2023-09/mfsbsd.adoc    | 21 ++++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-07-2023-09/mfsbsd.adoc b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-07-2023-09/mfsbsd.adoc
index 4d0fd045e7..7dca0c593e 100644
--- a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-07-2023-09/mfsbsd.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-07-2023-09/mfsbsd.adoc
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 === Integrate mfsBSD into the Release Building Tools
 
 Links: +
-link:https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCode2023Projects/IntegrateMfsBSDIntoTheReleaseBuildingTools[Wiki Article] URL: link:https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCode2023Projects/IntegrateMfsBSDIntoTheReleaseBuildingTools[]+
-link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D41705[Code Review on Phabricator] URL: link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D41705[]+
+link:https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCode2023Projects/IntegrateMfsBSDIntoTheReleaseBuildingTools[Wiki Article] URL: link:https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCode2023Projects/IntegrateMfsBSDIntoTheReleaseBuildingTools[] +
+link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D41705[Code Review on Phabricator] URL: link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D41705[] +
 link:https://freebsdfoundation.org/blog/meet-the-2023-freebsd-google-summer-of-code-students-soobin-rho/[FreeBSD Foundation Blog Post] URL: link:https://freebsdfoundation.org/blog/meet-the-2023-freebsd-google-summer-of-code-students-soobin-rho/[]
 
 Contact: Soobin Rho <[email protected]>
@@ -12,19 +12,22 @@ Contact: Soobin Rho <[email protected]>
 "mfsBSD is a toolset to create small-sized but full-featured mfsroot based distributions of FreeBSD that store all files in memory (MFS) [Memory File System] and load from hard drive, USB storage device, or optical medium.
 It can be used for a variety of purposes, including diskless systems, recovery partitions and remotely overwriting other operating systems."
 
-mailto:[email protected][Martin Matuska] is the creator of mfsBSD, and he is also the author of the original link:https://people.freebsd.org/~mm/mfsbsd/mfsbsd.pdf[mfsBSD white paper], which is where the excerpt above was taken from.
-The upstream mfsBSD is maintained at the link:https://github.com/mmatuska/mfsbsd[GitHub mfsBSD repository].
+mailto:[email protected][Martin Matuška] is the creator of mfsBSD.
+He is also author of the original (2009) link:https://people.freebsd.org/~mm/mfsbsd/mfsbsd.pdf[mfsBSD white paper], from which the excerpt above is taken.
+Upstream mfsBSD is maintained in the link:https://github.com/mmatuska/mfsbsd[repository on GitHub].
 
 ==== Purpose of this Project
 
-This project integrates mfsBSD into the FreeBSD release tool set, creating an additional target of mfsBSD images ([.filename]#.img# and [.filename]#.iso# files) into the [.filename]#/usr/src/release/Makefile#.
-Until now, mfsBSD only existed outside the FreeBSD release tool chain, and only the -release versions have been produced.
-With this project, mfsBSD images will be available at the official FreeBSD release page, and you will also be able to build mfsBSD yourself by invoking `cd /usr/src/release && make release WITH_MFSBSD=1`, which will then create [.filename]#mfsbsd-se.img# and [.filename]#mfsbsd-se.iso# at [.filename]#/usr/obj/usr/src/${ARCH}/release/#.
+This project integrates mfsBSD into the FreeBSD release tool set, creating an additional target of mfsBSD images ([.filename]#.img# and [.filename]#.iso# files) in [.filename]#/usr/src/release/Makefile#.
+Prior to integration, mfsBSD only existed outside the FreeBSD release tool chain, and only -RELEASE versions were produced.
+
+With this project, mfsBSD images will be available at the official FreeBSD release page.
+You will also be able to build mfsBSD yourself by invoking `cd /usr/src/release && make release WITH_MFSBSD=1`, which will then create [.filename]#mfsbsd-se.img# and [.filename]#mfsbsd-se.iso# at [.filename]#/usr/obj/usr/src/${ARCH}/release/#.
 
 ==== Changes from last quarter
 
 The code is ready, and is currently under review.
-If you would like to get involved with the code review process, please feel free to do so!
-Here is link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D41705[my code revision].
+If you would like to get involved with the review process, please feel free to do so!
+Here is link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D41705[my revision].
 
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