git: 0f61e03bc6 - main - Status/2024Q2: Fixes suggested by vale

The branch main has been updated by salvadore:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=0f61e03bc6f07651707694fca5eca3d943abd9ab

commit 0f61e03bc6f07651707694fca5eca3d943abd9ab
Author:     Lorenzo Salvadore <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: 2024-08-18 15:48:52 +0000
Commit:     Lorenzo Salvadore <[email protected]>
CommitDate: 2024-08-18 15:48:52 +0000

    Status/2024Q2: Fixes suggested by vale
---
 website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/audio.adoc |  4 +++-
 .../en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/capsicum-rs.adoc       | 13 ++++---------
 .../content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/github.adoc    |  2 +-
 website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/kde.adoc   |  2 +-
 4 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/audio.adoc b/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/audio.adoc
index a7e759f7e8..502c8a16fe 100644
--- a/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/audio.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/audio.adoc
@@ -9,7 +9,9 @@ Important work since link:https://www.freebsd.org/status/report-2024-01-2024-03/
 
 * Asynchronous audio device detach link:https://cgit.freebsd.org/src/commit/?id=44e128fe9d92c1a544b801cb56e907a66ef34691[is now possible].
 This functionality already ships with FreeBSD 14.1-RELEASE, as well as 14-STABLE.
-* Got rid of the "snd_clone" device cloning framework used in man:sound[4] and replaced it with DEVFS_CDEVPRIV(9). More info about behavior changes in the link:https://cgit.freebsd.org/src/commit/?id=e8c0d15a64fadb4a330f2da7244becaac161bb70[commit description]. Also ships with 14.1-RELEASE and 14-STABLE.
+* Got rid of the "snd_clone" device cloning framework used in man:sound[4] and replaced it with DEVFS_CDEVPRIV(9).
+More info about behavior changes in the link:https://cgit.freebsd.org/src/commit/?id=e8c0d15a64fadb4a330f2da7244becaac161bb70[commit description].
+Also ships with 14.1-RELEASE and 14-STABLE.
 * Several man:sound[4] crash and bug fixes.
 * More out of the box support for man:snd_hda[4] laptop sound.
 * Series of commits that clean up and simplify parts of man:sound[4].
diff --git a/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/capsicum-rs.adoc b/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/capsicum-rs.adoc
index bef15d253c..4197e746f7 100644
--- a/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/capsicum-rs.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/capsicum-rs.adoc
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-=== capsicum-rs
+=== Capsicum-rs
 
 Links: +
 link:https://github.com/dlrobertson/capsicum-rs[capsicum-rs on GitHub] URL: https://github.com/dlrobertson/capsicum-rs[]
@@ -6,14 +6,9 @@ link:https://github.com/asomers/capsicum-net[capsicum-net on GitHub] URL: https:
 
 Contact: Alan Somers <[email protected]>
 
-Capsicum is a lightweight OS capability and sandbox framework implementing a
-hybrid capability system model.
+Capsicum is a lightweight OS capability and sandbox framework implementing a hybrid capability system model.
 
-I've adopted the library providing Rust bindings for Capsicum, and extended it
-with support for man:libcasper[3] and man:cap_net[3].
-It's already being used by package:net-mgmt/nfs-exporter[] and by a TLS-enabled
-FTP server (the FTP server is closed-source, but all of the interesting bits
-reside in an open source library, and an example server can be found at
-link:https://github.com/bolcom/libunftp/tree/master/crates/unftp-sbe-fs/examples[]).
+I have adopted the library providing Rust bindings for Capsicum, and extended it with support for man:libcasper[3] and man:cap_net[3].
+It is already being used by package:net-mgmt/nfs-exporter[] and by a TLS-enabled FTP server (the FTP server is closed-source, but all of the interesting bits reside in an open source library, and an example server can be found at link:https://github.com/bolcom/libunftp/tree/master/crates/unftp-sbe-fs/examples[]).
 
 Sponsor: Axcient
diff --git a/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/github.adoc b/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/github.adoc
index 97eceda17e..be5a1348fa 100644
--- a/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/github.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/github.adoc
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Current status:
 
 We need help with automating the process:
 
- * Add automated testing that's context specific (for example, run igor over man pages).
+ * Add automated testing that is context specific (for example, run igor over man pages).
  * Add build/install tests that test-boot the resulting image.
  * Automate common tasks, like man page corrections, into staging process.
  * Add simple smoke testing for the staging branch for tier 1 architectures.
diff --git a/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/kde.adoc b/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/kde.adoc
index 5aca5509dd..981fb6c324 100644
--- a/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/kde.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/status/report-2024-04-2024-06/kde.adoc
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Contact: Adriaan de Groot <[email protected]>
 
 The KDE on FreeBSD project packages CMake, Qt, and software from the KDE Community, for the FreeBSD ports tree.
 The software includes a full desktop environment called KDE Plasma (for both X11 and Wayland) and hundreds of applications that can be used on any FreeBSD machine.
-The mailto:[email protected][KDE team] is part of mailto:[email protected][desktop@], building the software stack to make FreeBSD beautiful and usable as a daily-driver graphical desktop workstation.
+The mailto:[email protected][KDE team] is part of mailto:[email protected][desktop@], building the software stack to make FreeBSD beautiful and usable as a daily driver graphical desktop workstation.
 
 We missed a quarter, while the broader KDE community celebrated the KDE Megarelease of KDE Frameworks 6, KDE Plasma 6 and KDE Gear.
 The latest software is still not available on FreeBSD, pending more testing and some integration work.