git: 76f5a5635a - main - releases: Fix punctuation

Colin Percival <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
The branch main has been updated by cperciva:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=76f5a5635a23c24c5f4a1031b54f429e9a2a6f3d

commit 76f5a5635a23c24c5f4a1031b54f429e9a2a6f3d
Author:     Colin Percival <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: 2025-06-22 04:28:20 +0000
Commit:     Colin Percival <[email protected]>
CommitDate: 2025-06-22 04:32:23 +0000

    releases: Fix punctuation
    
    Nonessential information in a sentence can be set off by preceding
    *and following* it with commas.
    
    While we're here, avoid unnecessarily splitting a sentence across
    lines.
    
    Co-authored-by: Graham Perrin
---
 website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc        | 2 +-
 website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc | 2 +-
 website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc | 2 +-
 website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc | 3 +--
 website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc | 2 +-
 website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc | 3 +--
 website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc | 2 +-
 website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc | 2 +-
 website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc | 3 +--
 website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc | 3 +--
 website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc | 2 +-
 11 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc b/website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc
index 606ebd91b8..ff17469ef5 100644
--- a/website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc
+++ b/website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link:
 
 More detailed information
 //, such as release notes
-// and hardware notes
+// and hardware notes,
 can be found at these pages:
 
 //link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc
index 3f722cd9ef..630b04cb2f 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link:
 
 == Detailed Information
 
-More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages:
+More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages:
 
 link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +
 link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] +
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc
index 69342ebe9b..82ece08200 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link:
 
 == Detailed Information
 
-More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages:
+More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages:
 
 link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +
 link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] +
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc
index 18ae91a057..f484350787 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc
@@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link:
 
 == Detailed Information
 
-More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes
-can be found at these pages:
+More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages:
 
 link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +
 link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] +
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc
index 1836ff59e6..3a7f7f2228 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link:
 
 == Detailed Information
 
-More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages:
+More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages:
 
 link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +
 link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] +
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc
index d5cce4ca8e..7760e7392b 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc
@@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link:
 
 == Detailed Information
 
-More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes,
-can be found at these pages:
+More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages:
 
 link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +
 link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] +
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc
index 11a691aa2b..5fa815d2ff 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link:
 
 == Detailed Information
 
-More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages:
+More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages:
 
 link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +
 link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] +
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc
index 8be3fd0905..6c93949f60 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link:
 
 == Detailed Information
 
-More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages:
+More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages:
 
 link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +
 link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] +
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc
index 30c4f8e6a3..fbf528ceb1 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc
@@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link:
 
 == Detailed Information
 
-More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes,
-can be found at these pages:
+More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages:
 
 link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +
 link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] +
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc
index b8a2a8a486..dbc3c5bea4 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc
@@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link:
 
 == Detailed Information
 
-More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes,
-can be found at these pages:
+More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages:
 
 link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +
 link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] +
diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc
index 76ebd9328c..54243d1fa3 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link:
 
 More detailed information
 //, such as release notes
-// and hardware notes
+// and hardware notes,
 can be found at these pages:
 
 //link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +
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