Re: TinyBSD article for the doc/ tree [was: Re: tinybsd qemu small howto]

Giorgos Keramidas wrote:
> 
> An SGML article, with most of the text being just an adaptation of the
> tinybsd/Documentation wiki page is now online at:
> 
> http://people.freebsd.org/~keramida/tinybsd-20080310-01/article.sgml
> 
> A preformatted version of the article is available in the same directory.
> You can read it at:
> 
> http://people.freebsd.org/~keramida/tinybsd-20080310-01/article.html
> 

That's great Giorgos! Thanks for your help. :)

> Can you please review the article?  It would be interesting to know:
> 
>   - If there are technical errors in what I wrote.  My first TinyBSD
>     build is running as I'm typing this, so I don't really count as
>     an experienced TinyBSD user.

There are no errors, everything is ok.

> 
>   - If there is something else you would like me to add.
> 

The article is very objective and i think that is what we want to.
Congratz! :)

>   - If there are parts you don't like about the text, sections that
>     we should rewrite, fix, and so on.

No, that's ok, very good as i said, please just change only my mail
address to [email protected]

> 
> There are also a few parts which I haven't completely converted yet, and
> some places where I have questions about MFSROOT images and config file
> changes.  I'll experiment a bit with the TinyBSD image I'm building now,
> but if you can help me fill in the last few sections, it would be nice :)
> 

Oks, what are your questions about MFSROOT and config files?

About the last sections i'll organize what i wrote and will send it to
you by private mail.

> You can see how I'm considering to organize the remaining sections by
> reading the SGML comments in the `article.sgml' file.
> 

I have a sugestion: what do you think about create a new handbook
session called "embedded" and add both nanobsd and tinybsd article? i
think it could be better.

Cheers,
-- 
Jean