Re: Proofreader touchups to VAX INSTALL.more?
Martin Husemann <[email protected]> Sun, 24 Mar 2024 13:56:39 +0100
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On Sat, Mar 23, 2024 at 09:34:02PM -0400, Mouse wrote: > > support for the others included in source form. Please see > > the NetBSD website: https://www.NetBSD.org/ for information > > on them. > > I would argue the : after `website' should be removed. That part is beyond my roff fu - it looks nice in the html output and is hard to rephrase to make both versions optimal. > > If you wish to install the sets from tape then stage you > > will need to download the *.tgz files from > > This seems a bit incoherent to me. It appears to be using "stage" as a > verb, but it is not at all clear to me what it means by it. None of > the verb meanings of "stage" I'm familiar with match the context. It was copy&pasted and the "stage" was a left over from a "second stage bootloader". I just removed the stray "stage". All other applied to -current, will request pullup. Thanks! Martin