A diff for INSTALL.html

Andras Farkas <[email protected]> Sat, 4 Dec 2021 23:43:00 -0800
Newsgroups gmane.os.netbsd.documentation
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Hi!

I spotted some minor errors in:
https://cdn.netbsd.org/pub/NetBSD/NetBSD-9.2/amd64/INSTALL.html

I've attached a diff.  My apologies for it just being a diff of the
.html file, but I don't know what it's generated from.  I'm willing to
make a diff of the actual source if I can be guided to the right file,
and to the right directions to produce a good diff.
SHA512 (installhtmldiff) =
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The most important fixes are the English grammar and spelling fixes,
though I included other small things.

I send this as an email rather than using the web Send PR form since I
wasn't able to upload a diff file there.

One thing I didn't do in the diff...  I wish the mentions of full,
minimal, and custom installations mentioned how a full installation
isn't truly full: it doesn't install the source sets.  That caught me
the first time, and I had to correct that with a second install.
(doing a custom install to get all the sets, including source sets: on
that topic, I wish the USB install image included the source sets)

Thanks for reading!

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