Small issues on www.openbsd.org/47.html

Richard Toohey <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.openbsd.www
Message-ID <[email protected]>
<quote>
Improved hardware support, including:
...
eliminate spurious softraid(4) error messages for removeable devices without
media.
</quote>

Removable only has one "e", at the end.

Minor nitpick in the same section - the top 40 or so list items start with a
capital letter, but the last three items start with a lower case letter.  In
most sections the list items start with capital letters (but the Assorted
improvements section does the opposite.)

And another minor minor nitpick - under the Assorted improvements - are the
last two items meant to be in their own section(s) - or are they part of
Assorted items?  They've got filled bullets and aren't indented ... but they
look as though they should be part of Assorted items?

As always, looking forward to the release and thanks to the developers for
their work.

Thanks.
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