Re: current.html diff documenting ahci change

Nick Holland <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.openbsd.www
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Peter N. M. Hansteen wrote:
> My day started with an upgrade to the 2007-03-27 snapshot on my
> laptop, and by this afternoon I finally got around to writing what
> might be a usable entry for the web.
> 
> Diff inline below (output from diff -u).
> 
> Cheers,
> Peter

Good addition (looks like developers forgot about this page), but
a few comments on style:
  wrap at around 72 chars where at all possible.
    (stuff in <pre> tags should be wrapped at 80 chars, to match what
     would be on the screen, it's actually pretty important, as the
     <pre> tags with long lines do funny things in rendering.  I
     fudged a bit here, by wrapping at a word boundary, as I figure
     people should be reading the words...)
  New sentence, new line.
  blank line before <p> tags
  no </p> tags
  Put the <pre> tags inside <blockquote> tags

(yeah, I see some of the other additions to this page don't quite
follow those guidelines, either...)

Thanks!

Nick.
lmpx.com only provides a reader for public news (NNTP) servers. It is not affiliated with the servers or forums shown here and is not responsible for the content of articles, which is written by their respective authors.