Re: current.html diff documenting ahci change
Nick Holland <[email protected]>
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Peter N. M. Hansteen wrote:
> My day started with an upgrade to the 2007-03-27 snapshot on my
> laptop, and by this afternoon I finally got around to writing what
> might be a usable entry for the web.
>
> Diff inline below (output from diff -u).
>
> Cheers,
> Peter
Good addition (looks like developers forgot about this page), but
a few comments on style:
wrap at around 72 chars where at all possible.
(stuff in <pre> tags should be wrapped at 80 chars, to match what
would be on the screen, it's actually pretty important, as the
<pre> tags with long lines do funny things in rendering. I
fudged a bit here, by wrapping at a word boundary, as I figure
people should be reading the words...)
New sentence, new line.
blank line before <p> tags
no </p> tags
Put the <pre> tags inside <blockquote> tags
(yeah, I see some of the other additions to this page don't quite
follow those guidelines, either...)
Thanks!
Nick.