Re: Carbusters - Journal of the Carfree Movement?
"Todd Edelman, Green Idea Factory" <[email protected]>
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Hi, Something added text is good but 'Journal of the Carfree Movement' is kind of long (more words means smaller words and harder to see, especially relative to the main title). Also, it is clear that the magazine is a journal (or publication) so getting rid of that word would create larger font possibilities. If the main text stays, I suggest adding an "a" at the beginning to be more modest, and leave space for other existing and future carfree-themed publications. I realise that some non-native English speakers might see this difference differently, so, for example, if it was "THE Journal..." it would mean it was the only and/or the best one. So "Journal" without "a" kind of implies what the "the" declares. Modesty is good policy, let's let the contents speak for themselves. Another idea is to still keep "Carbusters" large and vivid, but have something like "The Carbusters of the Carfree Movement", which I admit sounds more radical. Also, we could just have "Carfree Movement" under the title (i.e. moving towards carfree, or moving without cars), or just the title followed by "Towards Carfree Cities" which more clearly links the magazine and the conference series. Last one: In any online edition all of this is easier to play with. Have fun, T Jean Pierre Wilmotte wrote: > At 15:04 +0200 8/07/08, Theo Haris wrote: > >> Even though the AGM decided to keep the name >> Carbusters for now, we were thinking here in >> Prague to add below the name the words 'Journal >> of the Carfree Movement'. We would like to >> initiate a discussion in the list to hear all >> possible viewpoints and decide collectively if >> that's a good idea or not. >> >> We are thinking that adding this we would give >> to the magazine a more serious undertone, while >> retaining the old name, with all the positive >> things that stem from it, such as its >> recognizability and the fact that a name change >> would cost serious money currently. >> > > I agree 100% ! > -- -------------------------------------------- Todd Edelman Director Green Idea Factory Korunni 72 CZ-10100 Praha 10 Czech Republic Skype: toddedelman ++420 605 915 970 ++420 222 517 832 [email protected] http://greenideafactory.blogspot.com/ www.flickr.com/photos/edelman Green Idea Factory is a member of World Carfree Network www.worldcarfree.net CAR is over. If you WANT it. --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "World Carfree Network" group. To post to this group, send email to carfree_network-/[email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to carfree_network-unsubscribe-/[email protected] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/carfree_network?hl=en -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---