RE: It's Not A Decent Harry Potter Movie
John Hannon <[email protected]>
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If I may offer just a bit of adivce, writing-wise (and this IS intended in a helpful way), you seem to have reviewed a movie without offering a single concrete example as to what you don't like about it. Good review-writing on any subject ought to describe in *some* detail the object the author is reacting to. -----Original Message----- From: Bijan Parsia [mailto:bparsia-vEoVa6Jh+/J4piUD7e9S/[email protected]] Sent: Thursday, January 10, 2002 8:57 AM To: bonobos-4GNy1lrxftmrG/[email protected] Subject: Re: [Bonobos] It's Not A Decent Harry Potter Movie On Thu, 10 Jan 2002, Paul Ford wrote: > Youch! I take it that it's in response to damian's bash. > Bij, it is in need of more of your regular punchy style and wit. Well, I seem to be all out. I don't think it's *that* bad. It's a simple report & trash. > Here > are some other things to make fun of: [snip list] > And on and on. Sure, but what's the point? I think I'm avoiding getting into the details. Things were bad, but never in an interesting or amusing way. (Contrast, D&D's blue lips phenomenon.) Cheers, Bijan. _______________________________________________ Bonobos maillist - Bonobos-4GNy1lrxftmrG/[email protected] http://monkeyfist.com/mailman/listinfo/bonobos