RE: Proposal for Rec36

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> Sent: Thursday, October 06, 2005 08:21
> To: Hervé Ruellan
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> Subject: Re: Proposal for Rec36
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> 
> Hervé:  thank you for drafting this.  Generally I like it, 
> but I have a 
> proposed edit that both corrects a small typo and also 
> changes the sense a 
> bit:
> 
> <HervéProposal>
> Note that this assume that the [children] of the element 
> information item 
> to be optimized contains only character information items.
> </HervéProposal>
> <suggestedEdit>
> Note that this rule requires that the [children] of the element 
> information item to be optimized contains only character information 
> items.
> </suggestedEdit>
>


I am happy with Noah's suggestion.  Thanks.

Alessandro


 
> Reasons:
> * I don't really think we're assuming it.  We're saying:  "if 
> there is 
> something other than character children, you can't optimize"
> * In any case, I think "assume" needs to be "assumes", since 
> "this" is 
> singular
> 
> Otherwise, I think this is a fine resolution to the issue.  Thank you.
> 
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