Re: Status and links to Part 3
[email protected] Thu, 20 Jul 2006 16:34:54 -0400
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Dave Orchard writes: > I did one small editorial change as suggested by NM, Looks good, thanks! > I think a bit more wordsmithing is in order for that section as it now seems to read a bit redundant to me. FWIW, I'm OK with it as is. Found a few other minor things: * Typo: descovers -> discovers * Column widths in tables in 2.3 don't look so good in Firefox. Speaking as an experienced editor to a somewhat less experienced editor, you can look forward to hours of fun trying to do tables in a way that look reasonable in most browsers, and that don't clip when printed from those browsers. * Editorial: suggest first paras of 2.2 be made into one. I think the thoughs go together, and it's less visually choppy that way. Not important obviously. Overall, I need to revisit some of David Hull's concerns, but pending that this still looks pretty good to me. I think the swap of the abnormal stuff is an improvement. Much appreciated. Thanks! Noah -------------------------------------- Noah Mendelsohn IBM Corporation One Rogers Street Cambridge, MA 02142 1-617-693-4036 -------------------------------------- "David Orchard" <[email protected]> Sent by: [email protected] 07/20/2006 04:00 PM To: <[email protected]> cc: (bcc: Noah Mendelsohn/Cambridge/IBM) Subject: Status and links to Part 3 I've updated soap12 part3 [1] - first described at [2] - and checked the files into cvs. I did one small editorial change as suggested by NM, which was to move the abnormal operation material a little lower. I think a bit more wordsmithing is in order for that section as it now seems to read a bit redundant to me. David Hull had a large number of substantial comments, suggestions, and rewrites such as [3], [4]. However, it's not clear to me if these are still held to or not. >From an editorial perspective, I think we are up to date on the drafts. My work here is done. The WG can always instruct me to make subsequent changes to the docs. Cheers, Dave [1] http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/6/soap12-part3 [2] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/xml-dist-app/2006Jun/0000.html [3] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/xml-dist-app/2006Apr/0020.html [4] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/xml-dist-app/2006Jun/0004.html Ps. This is my 5th set of activity in w3c cvs this week. Previous items: TAG versioning finding, TAG minutes, ws-policy edits, xml schema 1.1 versioning guide. When it rains, it pours!