Re: PPB: Poem for Kathy / Will Dockery

Cujo DeSockpuppet <[email protected]> posted:
> Will Dockery <[email protected]> wrote in
> news:[email protected]: 
>> [email protected] (HarryLime) posted:
> >> Will Dockery wrote:
> >>> George J. Dance wrote:
> 
> >>> Penny's Poetry Blog's poem for Valentine's Day:
> >> >> Poem for Kathy, by Will Dockery
> >> >> 
> >> >> [...]
> >> >> I can't think of
> >> >> anything else I should write.
> >> >> If I try
> >> >> my emotions explode.
> >> >
> >> > This is an eventful area of time in my personal history, as some
> >> > who know my biography will understand. 
> >> 
> >> Was.  This *was* and eventful time in your personal history.  History
> >> is, by definition, in the past, so past tense is required. 
> >> 
> >> Also, time does not have spatial dimensions, so there is no such
> >> thing as an "area of time." 
> >> 
> >> You really need to enroll in a basic English course. 
> > 
> > Thanks for the feedback, but watch out,Cujo will call you a "grammar
> > Nazi." 
> 
> It's all you've whined about for days

Not really, but I did find it amusing that a know-it-all like Miguel world make such an error.

😏

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Poetry and songs of Will Dockery:
https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery