Re: PPB: Poem for Kathy / Will Dockery

[email protected] (NancyGene)
Newsgroups alt.arts.poetry.comments
Message-ID <[email protected]>
> Miguel Sucio wrote:
> 
>> Will-Dockery wrote:
>> 
>>> NancyGene wrote:
>>> 
>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>>> [email protected] (George J. Dance) posted:
>>>> 
>>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>> George J. Dance wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Penny's Poetry Blog's poem for Valentine's Day:
>>>>> Poem for Kathy, by Will Dockery
>>>>> 
>>>>> [...]
>>>>> I can't think of
>>>>> anything else I should write.
>>>>> If I try
>>>>> my emotions explode.
>>>>> 
>>>>> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2026/02/poem-for-kathy-will-dockery.html
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks again for giving me a moment in the spotlight, GJD.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thank you for providing me a poem for Valentine's Day, Will. I hope and expect,
>>>>> that you'll get much more than a minute's publicity from it. I was happy to see
>>>>> it reenter PPB's Top 10 this month, and I don't think that will be the last time.
>>>>> It will be up and getting reads as long as the blog stays up; that's the least I
>>>>> can do for a writer.
>>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Well put, your efforts to preserve poetry history are appreciated.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> That should be efforts 'are' appreciated.  Also, you have a comma splice in the "sentence," so you should (correctly) have a period, dash or a semi-colon after "put."
>>> 
>>> You're welcome.
>> 
>> 
>> Again, thanks for pointing out my error, NancyGene.
>> 
>> Too bad you're unable to help Miguel and Bruce with their similar errors.
>> 
>> Miguel, as you know, needs help with commas and quotation marks, while Bruce (similar to Jim Senetto) has probables using the apostrophe.
>> 
>> Perhaps, "if time permits," you can help them sometimes, as well?
>> 
>> 😏
> 
> 
> 
> Probables?  LOL! Sometimes?  LOL! LOL!  You are an obstinate oaf who bangs out replies with bloated hands and zero regard for truth, accuracy, or basic spelling. For more than a decade you have blamed your eyes for every boneheaded gaffe, stumble, blunder, and bumble. That excuse has worn thin.
> Maybe the Dollar Store raising prices to one twenty five put reading glasses out of your budget. Skip a bologna sandwich and buy a pair. Either get readers or stop pretending you can read well enough to argue. From the looks of it, you have not skipped many meals, but you could stand to skip the arrogance.
> Keep snipping. Keep hiding. Every edit only proves how small, hollow, and laughable your act really is. You are not a debater. You are a clown with a delete key.
> 
> So now you believe I am Bruce?  Or is it Cujo, since you said that Cujo and I commit the same grammar mistake repeatedly?   If that were true, and it isn't, how is it Cujo is off the hook?  You then shifted the argument to the errant use of a comma, and when shown there are different grammar rules depending on where one is born, you had a meltdown and wanted to know where I am from.  Your frothing little tizzy has been duly recorded, cataloged, and laughed at. Please, keep performing; your theatrics are the only thing here more entertaining than your grasp of grammar.
> 
> Try to make sense when you lie.




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