Re: Ritual Memory. by Will Dockery
Will Dockery <[email protected]>
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Rik Roots <[email protected]> posted: > Will Dockery wrote: > > > Ritual Memory. > > > <snip> > > Derivative repetitions that roll across the screen > > > I will not rip it out of here > > it is an honest poem. > > So I will not edit it > > why would I even want to do that? > > > A *good* poem is not an honest poem, it is an *entertaining* poem. This poem > ain't singing and dancing. Fix it, or put it out of it's misery. Please. > > > -Will Dockery > > > Rik, knee deep. Good poetry advice from the one and only Rik Roots. 😏