Re: Ritual Memory. by Will Dockery

Will Dockery <[email protected]>
Newsgroups alt.arts.poetry.comments
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Rik Roots <[email protected]> posted:
> Will Dockery wrote:
> 
> > Ritual Memory.
> > 
> <snip>
> 
> Derivative repetitions that roll across the screen
> 
> > I will not rip it out of here
> > it is an honest poem.
> > So I will not edit it
> > why would I even want to do that?
> > 
> A *good* poem is not an honest poem, it is an *entertaining* poem. This poem
> ain't singing and dancing. Fix it, or put it out of it's misery. Please.
> 
> > -Will Dockery
> >
> Rik, knee deep.

Good poetry advice from the one and only Rik Roots.

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