Re: Two Little Things
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> What Rhyme is it? wrote: > "Dale Houstman" <dmh7> wrote in message news:[email protected]... > >> _________________ >> >> Two Little Things >> _________________ >> >> >> >> 1. >> >> Night, a letter, only >> its sans serif peak encased >> in pale metallic threads >> wandered away >> upon a boat’s reflection >> full of anxious waiters >> and haloed suitcases stacked >> under the blue trees >> which are literary >> like varnished ropes. >> >> 2. >> >> Day, a bloodstain >> on the schoolgirl’s pigtail >> maybe it’s a violin >> embedded in a hand >> an ornamental nova >> or not >> a van full of roses >> bulging in a grocery bag >> or not >> > > > You say "or not" as if you just don't care, > but I know you do. > > You are seething inside. > > Why not let it out? Again, I didn't notice any anger in the poem. This response appears in the discussion at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=658143568#658143568 -- Via JLA Forums web gateway for alt.arts.poetry.comments: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewforum.php?f=655