Re: Morning Perceptions / Will Dockery
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> Cujo DeSockpuppet wrote: > Will Dockery <user3274> wrote in > news:[email protected]: > > >> >> Cujo DeSockpuppet <cujo> posted: >> [email protected] (Will-Dockery) wrote in >> news:[email protected]: >> >> Morning Perceptions >> >> To awaken on the morning of the journey >> cross out the front lawn >> to the pass. >> >> It was a crisp blue Spring morning in Atlanta >> the sky was a rich cobalt color >> the skyline >> seemed melancholy and sparse. >> >> [...] >> >> How exactly do you do this? >> >> "cross out the front lawn" >> >> Your alleged style seems to be random line breaks. It's still babble. >> >> There you go again, blaming your reading comprehension problems on the >> reading material, Kevin Fries. >> > > > You snipped out the questions > > How exactly do you "cross out the front lawn", > > ^^^ Well, well, there's that pesky grammar error again. ^^^ In American English, commas go *inside* the quotation marks, Kevin. Have Miguel explain it to you, as he was recently schooled about this. 😏 This response appears in the discussion at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=699207490#699207490 -- Via JLA Forums web gateway for alt.arts.poetry.comments: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewforum.php?f=655