[web-doc] master: Resolve a typo, reword a statement

[email protected] (Tiffany via GitHub) Sat, 31 Jul 2021 20:40:55 +0000
Newsgroups php.doc.web
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: Tiffany (tiffany-taylor)
Committer: GitHub (web-flow)
Pusher: tiffany-taylor
Date: 2021-07-31T15:41:20-05:00

Commit: https://github.com/php/web-doc/commit/591edb2c8fd190fed29b52c4b44e4c80ee11d9f0
Raw diff: https://github.com/php/web-doc/commit/591edb2c8fd190fed29b52c4b44e4c80ee11d9f0.diff

Resolve a typo, reword a statement

Changed paths:
  M  tutorial/local-setup.md


Diff:

diff --git a/tutorial/local-setup.md b/tutorial/local-setup.md
index d8089dd..34e2b03 100644
--- a/tutorial/local-setup.md
+++ b/tutorial/local-setup.md
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ $ git clone https://github.com/php/doc-base.git
 ```
 $ php doc-base/configure.php
 ```
-Running `configure.php` will run check and verify that the changes made to the XML validate with Docbook specification. If you receive an error message: resolve the error message and try running the configure.php script again. If you see an ASCII cat, your XML is valid.
+Running `configure.php` will check and validate the XML according to the Docbook specification. If you receive an error message: resolve the error message and try running the configure.php script again. If you see an ASCII cat, your XML is valid.
 
 ## Build the documentation
 We use PhD to build the documentation. It takes the source that `configure.php` generates, and builds
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ $ php phd/render.php --help
 ```
 
 ### Use PhD to build the documentation
-As previously stated, there are multiple formats PhD can build the docs, but the two most commonly used for checking changes are XHTML and PHP. Building the docs into PHP requires a web server to view the pages, whereas XHTML does not. For small changes, for example, affects only one page, building docs into XHTML is likely preferable.
+As previously stated, there are multiple formats PhD can build the docs, but the two most commonly used for checking changes are XHTML and PHP. Building the docs into PHP requires a web server to view the pages, whereas XHTML does not. For small changes, building docs into XHTML is likely preferable. An example of a small change is modifying one file.
 ```
 $ php doc-base/configure.php
 $ php phd/render.php --docbook doc-base/.manual.xml --package PHP --format xhtml