cvs: peardoc /en/package/mail/mail factory.xml intro.xml send.xml

[email protected] ("Ken Guest")
Newsgroups php.pear.doc
Message-ID <cvskguest1199470766@cvsserver>
kguest		Fri Jan  4 18:19:26 2008 UTC

  Modified files:              
    /peardoc/en/package/mail/mail	factory.xml intro.xml send.xml 
  Log:
  some minor corrections regarding grammar and readability
  
http://cvs.php.net/viewvc.cgi/peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/factory.xml?r1=1.8&r2=1.9&diff_format=u
Index: peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/factory.xml
diff -u peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/factory.xml:1.8 peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/factory.xml:1.9
--- peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/factory.xml:1.8	Sun Jul 16 11:58:33 2006
+++ peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/factory.xml	Fri Jan  4 18:19:26 2008
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $Revision: 1.8 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.9 $ -->
 
 <refentry id="package.mail.mail.factory">
  <refnamediv>
@@ -73,14 +73,14 @@
            <para>
             <parameter>$params["sendmail_path"]</parameter> -
             The location of the sendmail program on the
-            filesystem. Default is <parameter>/usr/bin/sendmail</parameter>
+            filesystem. Default is <parameter>/usr/bin/sendmail</parameter>.
            </para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
            <para>
             <parameter>$params["sendmail_args"]</parameter> -
             Additional parameters to pass to the sendmail. Default is
-            <parameter>-i</parameter>
+            <parameter>-i</parameter>.
            </para>
           </listitem>
          </itemizedlist>
@@ -93,20 +93,20 @@
           <listitem>
            <para>
             <parameter>$params["host"]</parameter> - The server to connect.
-            Default is <parameter>localhost</parameter>
+            Default is <parameter>localhost</parameter>.
            </para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
            <para>
             <parameter>$params["port"]</parameter> - The port to connect.
-            Default is <parameter>25</parameter>
+            Default is <parameter>25</parameter>.
            </para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
            <para>
             <parameter>$params["auth"]</parameter> - Whether or not to use
             SMTP authentication.
-            Default is &false;
+            Default is &false;.
            </para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
@@ -131,19 +131,19 @@
           <listitem>
            <para>
             <parameter>$params["timeout"]</parameter> - The SMTP connection
-            timeout. Default is &null; (no timeout)
+            timeout. Default is &null; (no timeout).
            </para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
            <para>
             <parameter>$params["verp"]</parameter> - Whether to use VERP
-            or not. Default is &false;
+            or not. Default is &false;.
            </para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
            <para>
             <parameter>$params["debug"]</parameter> - Whether to enable SMTP
-            debug mode or not. Default is &false;
+            debug mode or not. Default is &false;.
            </para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@
   &title.returns;
   <para>
    <parameter>object</parameter> - a specific &class.mail; instance
-   or a &class.pear-error; object, if fails
+   or a &class.pear-error; object on failure.
   </para>
  </refsect1>
 
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Index: peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/intro.xml
diff -u peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/intro.xml:1.2 peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/intro.xml:1.3
--- peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/intro.xml:1.2	Thu Nov 24 16:38:39 2005
+++ peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/intro.xml	Fri Jan  4 18:19:26 2008
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
 <refentry id="package.mail.mail.intro">
    <refnamediv>
     <refname>Introduction</refname>
@@ -15,14 +15,14 @@
       <para>
        Create a new instance of a specific <classname>Mail</classname>-Backend 
        with the <link linkend="package.mail.mail.factory">
-       <function>factory</function></link>-method.
+       <function>factory</function></link> method.
       </para>
      </listitem>
      <listitem>
       <simpara>Step 2</simpara>
       <para>
-       Send the mail using <link linkend="package.mail.mail.send">
-       <function>send</function></link>.
+       Send the mail using <link linkend="package.mail.mail.send"> the
+       <function>send</function></link> method.
       </para>
      </listitem>        
     </itemizedlist>
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Index: peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/send.xml
diff -u peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/send.xml:1.15 peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/send.xml:1.16
--- peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/send.xml:1.15	Sun Jul  8 03:36:08 2007
+++ peardoc/en/package/mail/mail/send.xml	Fri Jan  4 18:19:26 2008
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $Revision: 1.15 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.16 $ -->
 <refentry id="package.mail.mail.send">
    <refnamediv>
     <refname>Mail::send()</refname>
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
    <refsect1 id="package.mail.mail.send.desc">
     &title.desc;
     <para>
-     Sends a mail. The <function>send</function>-function is
+     Sends a mail. The <function>send</function> method is
      provided by the object returned from 
      <link linkend="package.mail.mail.factory"><function>factory</function>
      </link>     
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
     &title.returns;
     <para>
      <parameter>boolean</parameter> - &true; or
-    	a &class.pear-error; object, if fails
+    	a &class.pear-error; object on failure.
     </para>
    </refsect1>      
    <refsect1 id="package.mail.mail.send.throws">
@@ -103,12 +103,12 @@
          </entry>
          <entry>
           The from entry in the <parameter>$headers</parameter> array
-          contains one ore more characters which could be non-RFC compliant
+          contains one ore more characters which could be non-RFC compliant.
          </entry>
          <entry>
           Check the given from address for characters like: spaces or
           <literal>;</literal> or <literal>&amp;</literal> or
-          <literal>`</literal> (backtick)
+          <literal>`</literal> (backtick).
          </entry>
         </row>
         <row>
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@
           Sendmail returns a error, which must be handled by use.
          </entry>
          <entry>
-          See the documention of your mailer programm.
+          See the documention of your mailer program.
          </entry>
         </row>
         <row>
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@
           <quote>Failed to create a Net_SMTP object</quote>
          </entry>
          <entry>
-          Failure in class creation
+          Failure in class creation.
          </entry>
          <entry>
           Reinstall/update the <classname>Net_SMTP</classname> package.
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
            <parameter>host:port</parameter></quote>
          </entry>
          <entry>
-          Connect to SMTP server failed
+          Connect to SMTP server failed.
          </entry>
          <entry>
           Check <parameter>$param['port']</parameter> and 
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@
           <quote><parameter>method</parameter> authentication failure</quote>
          </entry>
          <entry>
-          Authentication failed
+          Authentication failed.
          </entry>
          <entry>
           Check <parameter>$param['auth']</parameter>,
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@
           <quote>Failed to set sender: <parameter>from</parameter></quote>
          </entry>
          <entry>
-          Setting the sender address failed
+          Setting the sender address failed.
          </entry>
          <entry>
           Check the RFC-compliances of the sender address and the server
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@
           </quote>
          </entry>
          <entry>
-          Sending of recipient address failed
+          Sending of recipient address failed.
          </entry>
          <entry>
           Check the RFC-compliances of the recipient address and the server
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