cvs: peardoc /en/guide/developers documentation.xml

cweiske		Thu May  7 15:47:33 2009 UTC

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    /peardoc/en/guide/developers	documentation.xml 
  Log:
  adjust to ashnazg's likings
  
  
http://cvs.php.net/viewvc.cgi/peardoc/en/guide/developers/documentation.xml?r1=1.54&r2=1.55&diff_format=u
Index: peardoc/en/guide/developers/documentation.xml
diff -u peardoc/en/guide/developers/documentation.xml:1.54 peardoc/en/guide/developers/documentation.xml:1.55
--- peardoc/en/guide/developers/documentation.xml:1.54	Thu May  7 15:46:01 2009
+++ peardoc/en/guide/developers/documentation.xml	Thu May  7 15:47:33 2009
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
          xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink">
   <title>Documentation</title>
 
-  <para>Documentation is a critical part of PEAR. The most interesting and
-  helpful package will not be used if there is no proper documentation that
-  tells users what the package is for and how to use it.</para>
+  <para>Documentation is a critical part of PEAR. Even the most interesting and
+  helpful package will not be used without proper documentation that
+  helps users understand it.</para>
 
   <para>Documentation for a package in PEAR means two things:</para>