Re: [RFC PATCH 04/17] Docs/mm/damon/design: document pgidle_unset probe filter type

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- [Low] Typos and grammatically awkward phrasing in the newly added documentation.
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--- Patch [4]: [RFC PATCH 04/17] Docs/mm/damon/design: document pgidle_unset probe filter type ---
commit 616f638e60cd5170d7a26046797874f2e31071a4
Author: SJ Park <[email protected]>

Docs/mm/damon/design: document pgidle_unset probe filter type
    
This commit updates the DAMON design document to include the newly added
pgidle_unset probe filter type. It also formats the supported filter types
into a list for improved readability.

> diff --git a/Documentation/mm/damon/design.rst b/Documentation/mm/damon/design.rst
> index aed6cb1cf4831..d9f64e9ae2879 100644
> --- a/Documentation/mm/damon/design.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/mm/damon/design.rst
> @@ -293,8 +293,14 @@ registration is made by specifying a probe per attribute.  Each of the probe
>  specifies a rule to determine if a given memory region has the related
>  attribute.  The rule is constructed with multiple filters.  The filters work
>  same to :ref:`DAMOS filters <damon_design_damos_filters>` except the supported
> -filter types.  Currently only ``anon`` and ``memcg`` filter types are supported
> -for data attributes monitoring.
> +filter types.  Currently below fitler types are supported.

[Severity: Low]
This isn't a bug, but there is a typo here ("fitler" instead of "filter").

> +
> +- ``anon``: Same to that for DAMOS filters.
> +- ``memcg``: Same to that for DAMOS filters.
> +- ``pgidle_unset``: Matches if the page for the memory is marked as not
> +  access-idle.
> +  Matches if the memory is not backed by pages that DAMON can idnetify

[Severity: Low]
This isn't a bug, but there is a typo here ("idnetify" instead of "identify").
Could this phrasing also be slightly adjusted for better flow? Something like
"pages for which DAMON can identify idleness" might read more naturally.

> +  idleness.
>  
>  If such probes are registered, DAMON executes the probes for each region's
>  sampling memory when it does the access :ref:`sampling

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