Re: [PATCH] packed-ring.tex: Add comma and remove redundancy to improve readability

Stefan Hajnoczi <[email protected]> Mon, 26 Jan 2026 10:54:28 -0500

Newsgroups	dev.linux.lists.virtio-comment
Message-ID	<20260126155428.GB7901@fedora>

On Fri, Jan 23, 2026 at 06:17:40PM -0600, Yodel Eldar wrote:
> A comma after "set" separates the prepositional phrase from the main
> clause where both the prepositional object and subject of the main
> clause are long descriptor flags, thereby improving readability.
> 
> Also, the second "is" refers to the same subject as the first and is,
> therefore, redundant. Eliminating it improves the flow of the sentence.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Yodel Eldar <[email protected]>
> ---
>  packed-ring.tex | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

Reviewed-by: Stefan Hajnoczi <[email protected]>

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