Re: "When the Mill Shut Down" / Will Dockery
The True Melissa <[email protected]>
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Will Dockery wrote in article <[email protected]>: > > [email protected] (George J. Dance) posted: > > Will Dockery wrote: > > > The True Melissa <thetruemelissa> posted: > > >> Verily, in article <LjOdnRUuepIHknf0nZ2dnZfqn_WdnZ2d>, did > > >> [email protected] deliver unto us this message: > > >> > > >> "When the Mill Shut Down" in the current form goes back to at least July 30 2006, where Stuart Leichter gave it a favorable review: > > >> > > >> https://groups.google.com/g/alt.arts.poetry.comments/c/IaDWIoMXOkU/m/QcPcBOeQF-0J > > >> > > >> *** > > >> > > >> On Sunday, July 30, 2006 at 5:16:55ââ¬Â¯PM UTC-4, Stuart Leichter wrote: > > >> > > >> in article [email protected], Will Dockery at > > >> [email protected] wrote on 7/30/06 12:59 PM: > > >> > > >> When. > > >> > > >> When the mill shut down, > > >> we hit the pavement with a thud, > > >> then we all got up and kept walking. > > >> Some to the work house, > > >> some to the poor house, > > >> some to the whorehouse, > > >> and the grave. > > >> > > >> -Will Dockery > > >> > > >> This one's good, Will. > > >> The title you might make When the mill shut down (without the comma, and > > >> then continue with the 2nd and following lines). > > >> I think you should post it with a C&C request in the subject line. > > >> Stuart > > >> (crit-cred: I know literal from figurative, I know opinions from sentiments, > > >> and I never threatened you) > > >> > > >> *** > > >> > > >> When the Mill Shut Down > > >> > > >> When the mill shut down, > > >> we hit the pavement with a thud, > > >> then we all got up and kept walking. > > >> Some to the work house, > > >> some to the poor house, > > >> some to the whorehouse, > > >> and the grave. > > >> > > >> -Will Dockery > > >> > > >> Nice. It sums up the dull, plodding feeling of getting on with our lives > > >> after something huge has ended with a wet splat. > > > > > > Thanks again, and hope you'll stuck with us for more poetry, Melissa. > > > > Did Melissa delete her post? If so: Wow! > > Melissa seems to be evading answering this question. > > In other words: > > *Crickets* What question? Do you mean the "question" of whether I deleted something? As I already explained, I didn't because of course I didn't. It's not even possible to delete something from Usenet. Once it's sent, it's sent. As for the web gateways, we use, I have deleted nothing from them and have no Earthly reason to do so because I don't use them. It was a ridiculous idea which I already pointed out was ridiculous. > ? @ -- The meek shall inherit, we're told, But I'm not so easily sold. For supposing they should, It would do them no good -- They'd lose it at once to the bold.