Re: Idea for website makeover

On 09/28/2011 10:25 AM, Andreas Hartmann wrote:
> Hi everyone,
>
> yesterday we discussed the sorry state of our website. Today I tried to
> give it a fresh look and add some text snippets to provide a quick
> overview.
>
> Here's a screenshot:
> http://www.flickr.com/photos/nobbynobbs/6192409224/sizes/o/in/photostream/
>
> Since our website design contest didn't fly I thought I could come up
> with something new myself.
>
> Maybe we can quickly discuss the contents here? Any suggestions are very
> welcome.
>
> -- Andreas
>

Looks good to me.

The "what is apache lenya" needs to be reworded to support trademark rules.

Apache Lenya needs to be used as an adjective to describe the thing it is.

Something like this:

The Apche Lenya web content management system (WCMS) is an open source 
publishing framework.

Or something like that.