Re: grabitational singularity

Anny,

I toyed with this variant for a while:

| the trouble with a bubble
|    on a pyramid top
|      is the point
|        it goes
|          pop
|           ⚠

But there was something about the syntactic anomaly
of the 1st version that struck me as rather fitting —
a silent caesura followed by the final interjection.

| the trouble with a bubble
|    on a pyramid top
|      is the point
|        where it
|           —
|          pop
|           ⚠

Regards,

Jon

Anny Ballardini wrote:
> maybe better this way (I need the "s"):
> 
> | the trouble with a bubble
> |    on a pyramid top
> |      is the point
> |        when it
> |           pop
> |            s
> |            ⚠
> 
> On Fri, May 17, 2013 at 3:48 AM, Jon Awbrey wrote:
> 
>> | the trouble with a bubble
>> |    on a pyramid top
>> |      is the point
>> |        when it
>> |          pop
>> |           ⚠

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