Re: grabitational singularity

Better, although I like the first one, too.


On Sun, May 19, 2013 at 8:52 PM, Jon Awbrey <[email protected]> wrote:

> Anny,
>
> I toyed with this variant for a while:
>
> | the trouble with a bubble
> |    on a pyramid top
> |      is the point
> |        it goes
> |          pop
> |           ⚠
>
> But there was something about the syntactic anomaly
> of the 1st version that struck me as rather fitting —
> a silent caesura followed by the final interjection.
>
> | the trouble with a bubble
> |    on a pyramid top
> |      is the point
> |        where it
> |           —
> |          pop
> |           ⚠
>
> Regards,
>
> Jon
>
> Anny Ballardini wrote:
>
>> maybe better this way (I need the "s"):
>>
>> | the trouble with a bubble
>> |    on a pyramid top
>> |      is the point
>> |        when it
>> |           pop
>> |            s
>> |            ⚠
>>
>> On Fri, May 17, 2013 at 3:48 AM, Jon Awbrey wrote:
>>
>>  | the trouble with a bubble
>>> |    on a pyramid top
>>> |      is the point
>>> |        when it
>>> |          pop
>>> |           ⚠
>>>
>>
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