D27630: Improve strings for "Show Desktop" effects

Nathaniel Graham <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.comp.kde.devel.kwin
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REVISION SUMMARY
  Problems with the current strings:
  
  - Incorrect capitalization
  - Grammatical errors ("to show the latter")
  - Inappropriate obscure references ("This might remind you of something.")
  - Redundancy (mentioning "showing the desktop" when the KCM's header already shows this)
  
  The above issues are fixed.

TEST PLAN
  Before: F8129332: Old.png <https://phabricator.kde.org/F8129332>
  After: F8129331: New.png <https://phabricator.kde.org/F8129331>

REPOSITORY
  R108 KWin

BRANCH
  better-strings-for-show-desktop-animation-effects (branched from master)

REVISION DETAIL
  https://phabricator.kde.org/D27630

AFFECTED FILES
  effects/eyeonscreen/package/metadata.desktop
  effects/windowaperture/package/metadata.desktop

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