Re: Video ad for kde - Code in

it just gets better! :)

On Saturday, December 11, 2010, Carl Symons wrote: 
> Years ago,
> we started with an idea to make things easy

"with an idea" => "with the idea"?

> and developed it further to be efficient.

"to be efficient" => "to include efficiency"?
 
> Then we chose to make it beautiful.

in terms of screen writing, i might write this as:

"Then .. <scene cut>
 We chose to make it beautiful
 We chose new perspectives ..."

etc.. so that in the audio the "we chose" parts line up.

> We chose new perspectives.
> We chose ingenuity over uniformity.
> We chose to create a community that is
> both work and enjoyment.
> 
> We are not free because we chose,

hm.. maybe more poetic phrasing is called for here, to capture the romance of 
it? 

"We are free not because we chose,"

> we choose because we are free.
> 
> And so can you.
> Be free. Choose KDE.

i'm really liking this more and more :) *shivers*

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